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Gatchaman Fiction Archive :: Transmute!
Reviews For Just Another Night on the Town
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Reviewer: Cricket Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/04/2012 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 1

Beautiful little scene. Only one quibble: You described him as a young man, and it's early in the war. I thought probably Jason, maybe Mark or Tiny. Keyop would have been a pre-teen, not young man.

Great work with the involuntary flashback, and Princess immediately understanding.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Cricket.  I made the change.  You know, when I first started this one, I thought it was about Jason.  It wasn't until later that I realized who I was writing about.

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