Date: 01/04/2009 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
Nice bit of battle-spackle here, Catherine. Your short pieces form interesting little fillers for your universe and I liked the 'dice' explanation. Nitpick: you introduce your MI operative as 'Colonel James' in one para, then refer to him as 'Jones' in the dialogue before returning to 'James' at the end. Overall a gently amusing piece to read.