Date: 02/28/2009 9:33 PM Title: Wavelength Cascade
Okay, how did I miss this when it was first posted? I love the way you've injected humour into the situation while meeting all the requirements of the generator. The changes of scene show the reader what's going on, setting up a nice bit of dramatic irony as we wait for the characters to catch up. Nicely done.
Heh, other than Wyldkat, everyone seems to have missed it. The phantom fanfic!
The idea generator is an evil thing. Everytime I look at it, I get another idea. Although, I admit, it's been great for giving short-story ideas. I'm glad you enjoyed the story. Having a story involving just a few team members and not in a full mission was fun to write. :)
Date: 02/21/2009 8:54 PM Title: Wavelength Cascade
I have been somewhat remiss.
I saw this shortly after it was posted and got a kick out of it. I did figure out the Dr's little toy had something to do with the psychos but that didn't detract one bit.
A few typos but not anything that can't be ignored. (just commeted on for critiquing purposes)
Thanks for the comment. If you think about it, could you email me typos you found?
And yes, the writing continues. Another fanfic is currently being worked on, only this one is Gatchaman related. :)