Date: 05/01/2009 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 1
I am always grateful for those with a flair for poetry. Well done! The only thing missing to to complete its' zarkiness is some line like this....
no one got hurt, not one little bit
not even where the mecha made a big pit!
lol - i suck at poetry - so glad there are people who are good at it! Thanks for sharing!
Author's Response: Nephedra: Love the new ending! Zarkiness should be a word. Maybe we should have a fic of definitions ... hmmm.
Date: 04/30/2009 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 1
Julie, that's great! I've never tried poetry other than reading The Raven. Good job!
Author's Response: Thanks, Becky. I've been writing lots of haiku lately for some reason. And I can't believe it's taken me nearly a year to respond to your comment! Wow, I need to be more responsive, don't I? Oh, well. Good thing we're friends! :)