Date: 07/22/2014 6:03 PM Title: Testimony II
I read this years ago and thought I'd reviewed, but apparently not.
If Key feels he did the right thing, that would be enough for the rest of the team, even if they have to knock Jay around for a while to get him to agree.
For Jay to agree to go meet the girl to actually help her shows how he can see beyond the red to realize not all who are in a Devil Stars are there by choice.
I too would like to see more on this if you ever get the urge.
Date: 09/04/2009 9:23 PM Title: Testimony II
Her seeing the girl as a girl first, not a killer, and approving Key's mercy, reminded me of what happens to Kelley.
I like her explanation to Jun. The core truth of why he did what he did, and the only part that matters to Kelley.
The Devil Star's reaction confirms that Key was right. Nice closure, and nice hook to the sequel, should it present itself for writing.
Date: 08/21/2009 9:09 AM Title: Testimony II
As always you write a wonderfully deatailed story. I thanksfully didn't need tissues at work - although they were nearby! Hate to have to explain to co-workers why I am crying at work! ha! I can see Key having this reaction - and I do so wonder what will happen when he sees the girl again...with Jay (could be interesting!). Is there a follow-on in the works? :)
Author's Response: I don't have a followup in mind, sorry. Still, anything has potential.
Date: 08/21/2009 4:44 AM Title: Testimony II
You have a way of writing that tugs at the heart strings for all of them and every gets me a bit teary sometimes. (Note for self; When reading your ficcies keep a box of tissues handy on the computer desk.)
Poor Key, I read that ficcie ages ago when he lost the love of his life when she was 'murdered' by Galactor... I thought it was well written. I for a minute I had re-read the section to place the story into its order in the series. (I thought he was talking to a ghost, you know reflecting.) Until I read that Jun saw her.
I also like the way you write Joe. Thanks for posting it.
Author's Response: You're right- I should place a timeline statement on this thing. Thanks for that and your review!