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Gatchaman Fiction Archive :: Transmute!
Reviews For New Brother
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Reviewer: Chris White Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2014 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 1

I agree with the others, a sad scenario, one of the more endearing facts about Ken's background in canon and yet just mentioned that one time. You brought it to life well, including its effects on everyone who mattered. I can see how Joe would have gotten attached to Ken's mom, and living with Ken and Nambu, they might have felt like a real family. 

Reviewer: Clouddancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2010 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 3

I loved seeing how Ken was brought into the family.  A sad read and you write it very well.

Author's Response: You helped with the middle. Thank you for that, and the review.

Reviewer: Becky Rock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/21/2009 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 3

Although sad, I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. Thanks for sharing.

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