Date: 01/19/2010 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 1
I liked this story and the twist at the end. I always love to see a stories about the Owl. ALthough I am not so sure the Owl was "willing" as much as "surprised." by the selection.
Although I could understand why the girls might choose such a "stong" looking guy to "protect" them on their walk home. ;)
Date: 12/01/2009 10:07 AM Title: Chapter 1
An interesting ending, but I'm not sure where the 'willing' part came from given his behavior earlier... still, it would be interesting to see the 'morning after'. And he doesn't even have the excuse of being drunk!
But oh. poor Jun...
Author's Response: Perhaps 'willing' wasn't the right word... Dumbfounded, maybe? There he is, standing with the two 'pretty boys' of the team, and he gets chosen? Whoo hoo! He probably didn't even realise what was happening... Actually, all I wanted to do was give the guy a break. As for the morning after, well... I'm imagining a red-faced, but exceptionally pleased with himself, Owl fronting up to the Snack J for a very late breakfast. Quite possibly walking a tad funny too.