Date: 01/12/2013 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 1
I hadn't realized I'd never reviewed this. Very well written. It seemed Jason's original assessment he was subconsciously sensing trouble was right, but then you threw in the twist ending. Jason's going to have an interesting time dealing with this revelation.
Date: 03/14/2010 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 1
An iteresting story with a twist that I did not expect.
Author's Response: I thought I had dropped enough hints that readers would figure out before Jason did -- or at least not be so surprised. Oh, and I couldn't think of a way to mention that he's clothed in the dream. He woke up before it got really steamy.