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Gatchaman Fiction Archive :: ElectricWhite
Penname: ElectricWhite [Contact] Real name: ElectricWhite
Member Since: 10/24/2010
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I'm fairly new to the fanfic scene, though I am a published poet.  I grew up with BotP and discovered the original Gatchaman a few months ago.  (Some members of my family refuse to believe that Ken and Joe are fictional characters and insist that I'm having a couple of online affairs!)
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Summary:

A Spectran escape pod crash-lands short of its intended target, and as a result, Pooh Bear receives a Very Strange Visitor.


Categories: Battle of the Planets
Series: None
Chapters: 1 - Table of Contents
Characters: Jason, Keyop, Mark, Other Crossover Character, Princess, Tiny Harper, Zoltar
Genre: Humor/Comedy
Story Warnings: None
Timeframe: Mid-Series
Universe: Cross-Over
Word count: 5450 - Read Count: 2131 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 05/26/2007 - Published: 05/26/2007
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Reviewer: ElectricWhite Signed
Date: 12/19/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Zoltar Meets Winnie-the-Pooh

If this had been written a few years earlier, I would have been reading A Very Entertaining Story to my grand-nephew at his bedtime!

Summary: Berg Katse finally finds a use for those little rat dogs with the bug out eyes. Use them to take over the world!
Categories: Gatchaman
Series: None
Chapters: 1 - Table of Contents
Characters: Berg Katse
Genre: Humor/Comedy
Story Warnings: Crude Humor, Nose-Cola Warning
Timeframe: Other
Universe: Alternate Universe, Tenuously Canon
Word count: 3889 - Read Count: 1849 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 06/01/2007 - Published: 06/01/2007
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Date: 11/20/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Operation: Mad Dog

I must confess I am a RABID fan of this piece! ;-D

Summary: Mark and Jason, perfectly healthy, spent their time in quarrantine playing practical jokes on one another. The problem is, sometimes great minds think alike. (And so do theirs.)
Categories: Battle of the Planets
Series: Scavengers
Chapters: 1 - Table of Contents
Characters: Princess
Genre: Humor/Comedy
Story Warnings: None
Timeframe: Mid-Series
Universe: Mostly Canon
Word count: 3346 - Read Count: 2207 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 06/15/2007 - Published: 06/15/2007
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Reviewer: ElectricWhite Signed
Date: 12/02/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh, if I only had this to read the last time I was in the hospital!

Author's Response: I don't hope you have a reason to go back, but if you ever do, imagine the fun...? :-) I'm sorry you were in the hospital in the first place. Thanks!

Summary: Episode Review: Oh, right... I'm on the wrong planet.
Categories: Battle of the Planets
Series: Episode Reviews
Chapters: 1 - Table of Contents
Characters: None
Genre: Episode Review
Story Warnings: None
Timeframe: Episode Rewrite
Universe: Canon
Word count: 7966 - Read Count: 1450 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 06/16/2007 - Published: 06/16/2007
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Date: 12/12/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Space Rocket Escort Revisited

It's very tempting to go on about how this episode was almost as stupidly stupid as stupid could get. . .but then I'd forget to mention a thought that I had while reading this: "getting Zarked" needs to be included in the Oxford English Dictionary!

Summary:

What if Mary Sue wrote BotP/Gatchaman fanfic?

(Warning:  If the title didn't already scare you away, please be advised that this piece should have an obnoxious humor warning!)  

 


Categories: Gatchaman, Battle of the Planets
Series: None
Chapters: 1 - Table of Contents
Characters: Mary Sue
Genre: Humor/Comedy
Story Warnings: Nose-Cola Warning
Timeframe: Other
Universe: Alternate Universe
Word count: 260 - Read Count: 1542 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 02/21/2008 - Published: 02/20/2008
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Date: 05/01/2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You said this was obnoxious, and, by golly, it sure was! Truth in advertising...

- Red Petals by Ebonyswanne - Rated: 13+ - - starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 7]
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Summary:

Jun is home from a long mission exhausted, and finds a pleasant surprise waiting for her... 


Categories: Gatchaman
Series: Moments caught in time.
Chapters: 1 - Table of Contents
Characters: Jun
Genre: Romance
Story Warnings: None
Timeframe: Mid-Series
Universe: Canon
Word count: 410 - Read Count: 1936 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 02/11/2011 - Published: 02/11/2011
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Date: 02/11/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Any lady who doesn't sigh dreamily at the end of this simply isn't human!

Author's Response: I think thats every girls dream moment..

Summary: While on a mission to the planet Demeter, Jason runs afoul of Spectra and disappears. Will the team find him before Spectra does?
Categories: Battle of the Planets
Series: None
Chapters: 12 - Table of Contents
Characters: Chief Anderson, Colonel Cronus, Jason, Keyop, Mark, Original Character, Princess, Tiny Harper
Genre: Angst, Mystery, Romance
Story Warnings: Adult Situations, Mature Content, Sexual Dialogue, Sexual Situations
Timeframe: Mid-Series
Universe: Alternate Universe
Word count: 81181 - Read Count: 18678 - Completed: No
Updated: 12/10/2013 - Published: 03/20/2011
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Reviewer: ElectricWhite Signed
Date: 09/10/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I am utterly hooked on this story! However, I do have one problem: the wait between chapters is AGONY!

Author's Response: Hi EW. Glad you're enjoying it. The reason for the delay is the chapters are posted in Bird Scramble first, which is done quarterly.

Summary: When the ISO can't determine what is making Jason sick, Anderson takes him to an old colleague, Dr. Greg House.
Categories: Battle of the Planets
Series: None
Chapters: 17 - Table of Contents
Characters: Chief Anderson, Jason, Keyop, Mark, Princess, Tiny Harper
Genre: Drama
Story Warnings: Mild Adult Situations
Timeframe: Mid-Series
Universe: Mostly Canon
Word count: 44883 - Read Count: 19625 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 12/19/2015 - Published: 03/26/2011
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Reviewer: ElectricWhite Signed
Date: 11/22/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is becoming more and more like an episode of "House"! Even the disgusting parasite bit's spot-on for the show. Now, just don't forget to let the good doctor flat-out call somebody an idiot. . .

Author's Response: Hi EW. It might not be House calling someone an idiot. I'm glad you like it. I don't like where the House series has gone, so it's been a while since I watched, but I try to catch reruns to keep my House-isms going.

- Calm by Becky Rock - Rated: 8+ - - starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 5]
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Summary: Jason finds out not all treatments prescribed by doctors are bad things.
Categories: Battle of the Planets
Series: None
Chapters: 1 - Table of Contents
Characters: Jason
Genre: General
Story Warnings: None
Timeframe: Mid-Series
Universe: Canon
Word count: 1471 - Read Count: 2908 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 08/21/2011 - Published: 08/21/2011
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Date: 12/19/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow. . . I didn't expect this to relax ME when I started reading! Excellent description.

Author's Response: That was my intention, EW. I use the idea of the fic as biofeedback to relax myself, imagining I'm the one getting the massage. Pretending Jason's the one giving it to me doesn't hurt, either.

Summary: While transporting an update for the Conway Tapes software to Riga, G-Force is attacked over a range called Traitor's Pass. Surrounded in his car by Spectra, Jason is captured. Anderson fears that the attack was staged, and Jason has defected...
Categories: Battle of the Planets
Series: None
Chapters: 20 - Table of Contents
Characters: Jason
Genre: Action/Adventure
Story Warnings: Mild Violence
Timeframe: Mid-Series
Universe: Canon
Word count: 15068 - Read Count: 36523 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 04/22/2012 - Published: 08/28/2011
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Reviewer: ElectricWhite Signed
Date: 02/29/2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I've read everything from the beginning to the end of Chapter 19, and the only time I put it down was when I had to go my storm shelter (doggone tornado warnings, anyway!) I'm eager to see what happens next. (Something tells me there's something else that will pop Jason in the nose...)

Author's Response: Hey EW, watch out for that tornado! I've promised that in a future fic, Jason will have a good time :)))))))

- Lifestyle Choices by KT1972 - Rated: Adult - - starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
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Summary: Joe's in love, and she's not trying to kill him, so why won't the rest of the team accept her?
Categories: Gatchaman
Series: None
Chapters: 6 - Table of Contents
Characters: Dr. Kozaburou Nambu, Jinpei, Joe Asakura, Jun, Ken Washio, Original Character, Ryu Nakanishi
Genre: Angst, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Story Warnings: Adult Situations, Explicit Material, Mature Content, Sexual Dialogue, Sexual Situations, Strong Language, Violence
Timeframe: Other
Universe: Mostly Canon
Word count: 24059 - Read Count: 408 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 10/15/2011 - Published: 10/07/2011
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Reviewer: ElectricWhite Signed
Date: 11/22/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You've really nailed the dysfunctional dating-type relationship. (Back when I was working on my Bachelor's degree, I ended up being the friend the wounded parties would call in the dead of the night. Not fun.) I just hope you aren't drawing from personal experience!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review EW. I kind of "borrowed" from many friends experiences and mixed them up a little bit!

Summary: PWP. No point to the story whatsoever, just something I felt like writing and wondered if anyone else would like to see!!
Categories: Gatchaman
Series: None
Chapters: 1 - Table of Contents
Characters: Jun, Ken Washio, Phoenix/God Phoenix
Genre: Plot-What-Plot, Romance
Story Warnings: Adult Situations, Sexual Dialogue, Sexual Situations
Timeframe: Mid-Series
Universe: Canon
Word count: 1607 - Read Count: 3118 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 11/18/2011 - Published: 11/18/2011
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Date: 11/20/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Smut for smut's sake?! I don't think so! This is just right to perk me up (so to speak). ;-)

Author's Response: Thank you for reading and enjoying it! It was smut of smut sake at the time of writing, I guess a story grew out of it;P I'm so glad it has got such a positive response from everyone though.

Summary: Inspired by a risqué picture of Joe/Jason published on Gatchamania.
Categories: Battle of the Planets
Series: A Fic for a Pic series
Chapters: 1 - Table of Contents
Characters: Jason
Genre: Humor/Comedy
Story Warnings: Adult Situations
Timeframe: Other
Universe: Alternate Universe
Word count: 605 - Read Count: 160 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 12/27/2011 - Published: 12/27/2011
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Date: 12/28/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh, the tragedy of it all! (snicker) How can the poor guy endure? (tee hee) He truly is a saint for suffering through this. (bowahahaha!) I really enjoyed this -- THANK YOU! (Pity more people don't have this kind of problem. . . )

Author's Response: Thank you EW! He's a darling, isn't he, for putting up with it all (big grin)?

Summary: Zoltar's attempt to destroy a nuclear plant and G-Force
Categories: Battle of the Planets
Series: None
Chapters: 1 - Table of Contents
Characters: Chief Anderson, Jason, Keyop, Mark, Princess, Tiny Harper, Zoltar
Genre: Action/Adventure
Story Warnings: Death
Timeframe: Episode Rewrite
Universe: Mostly Canon
Word count: 3552 - Read Count: 1061 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 01/01/2012 - Published: 01/01/2012
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Date: 01/04/2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is a good reminder that Chief Anderson wouldn't be sitting around, twiddling his thumbs whenever he's "off camera". I enjoyed seeing an episode from his pov.

Summary:

The second story in my Raven series. The first is "Growing Pains."

 Ken's greatest pain is his secret. That is, until he has to make a decision that could destroy the team, and himself. This story is Part 1 in what will be at least a three part series.

Now with an additional epilogue from Ken's POV, which should tie the story better into both the title and the series storyline ... 


Categories: Gatchaman
Series: Raven
Chapters: 5 - Table of Contents
Characters: Dr. Kozaburou Nambu, Goon, Jinpei, Joe Asakura, Jun, Ken Washio, Kentaro/Red Impulse, Phoenix/God Phoenix, Ryu Nakanishi
Genre: Angst, Drama, Slash
Story Warnings: Slash, Strong Language, Suicide, Violence, Yaoi
Timeframe: Mid-Series
Universe: Mostly Canon
Word count: 12591 - Read Count: 5980 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 04/03/2012 - Published: 02/25/2012
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Reviewer: ElectricWhite Signed starstar
Date: 02/27/2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I thought you did a fine job of delving into the turmoil Ken must have been feeling. However, I could tell you were holding back when it came to the interaction between Ken and the other teammates. Don't be afraid to let the story take you where it needs to go. And if you're not sure about a subject being explored, give the story an "Adult" rating and trust in the other members of this group to let you know if anything needs to be adjusted. This story hasn't reached its potential yet, and I hope to read more.

Author's Response:

Hmmm, it's possible I was over-focused on Ken and Joe (for some reason they're the ones who really pull at me), and/or on sticking really close to the Jigokillers episodes. Something to ponder! This is the first in a 3-part series, though it's the last one that came to mind, spurred by the Romance prompt. Would like a 2nd beta on the next part before posting it. Thanks for your comments. :)

I didn't think this one in particular needed an Adult rating, but the next 2 definitely will for a variety of reasons. 

Summary:

Sequel to "Life Starts Now" in my Raven series.  

Ken is still struggling with his decision during the Jigokillers. When things get ugly, and Galactor reveals a terrifying competence, he's determined not to make the same mistake twice. As a result, Joe is left behind to lead the team and figure out Ken's cryptic goodbye, while Ken is trapped in his own personal hell.

The next story in this series is "Never Too Late." 


Categories: Gatchaman
Series: Raven
Chapters: 18 - Table of Contents
Characters: Berg Katse, Dr. Kozaburou Nambu, Jinpei, Joe Asakura, Jun, Ken Washio, Kentaro/Red Impulse, Phoenix/God Phoenix, Ryu Nakanishi
Genre: None
Story Warnings: Adult Situations, Crude Humor, Death, Drug References, Drug Use, Erotica, Explicit Material, Graphic Violence, Mature Content, Sexual Dialogue, Sexual Situations, Slash, Strong Language, Suicide, Torture, Violence, Yaoi
Timeframe: Mid-Series
Universe: Tenuously Canon
Word count: 43150 - Read Count: 1775 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 03/04/2012 - Published: 03/04/2012
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Reviewer: ElectricWhite Signed
Date: 03/06/2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Good Lord, you've done it! This piece was compelling and enthralling, and the way the Condor and the tortured Eagle faced the end moved me to tears. I can't help wondering how on earth you're going to end the trilogy.

Author's Response: Aw thanks :) The next story is in beta ... this being me, the series is probably going to end up in 4 parts rather than 3, the next story is just as long as this one, but doesn't really conclude the arc so I'll need at least one more. Writing "short" is not my specialty. *grin*

- Three's Company by KT1972 - Rated: Adult - - starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 6]
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Summary: Back in February, I became the victim of some painful poking from various members of Gatchamania, (mentioning no names, but looking sternly at TJ, EW and DT). This is the result of their prompting!

I do not own the characters, this story is for fun, not profit!
Categories: Gatchaman
Series: Three's Company
Chapters: 1 - Table of Contents
Characters: Joe Asakura, Jun, Ken Washio
Genre: Plot-What-Plot, Romance
Story Warnings: Adult Situations, Explicit Material, Mature Content, Sexual Dialogue, Sexual Situations, Strong Language
Timeframe: Other
Universe: Mostly Canon
Word count: 2598 - Read Count: 183 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 03/12/2012 - Published: 03/12/2012
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Reviewer: ElectricWhite Signed
Date: 03/13/2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow oh wow oh wow! I simply MUST look through the posts to find you exact inspiration...somehow I never expected anything that could set off the smoke detector!

Author's Response: try TJ's "had to get this out" thread, pages 90/91.... you wanted to use the big guns if poking didn't work! Glad you liked it anyway :P

Summary: The team has to perform Romeo & Juliet. Katse, being the drama queen s/he is, gets in on the act. Silliness ensues. (Warning: This fic is about 20 yrs old so don't expect awesomeness, just silly. :)
Categories: Gatchaman
Series: None
Chapters: 1 - Table of Contents
Characters: Berg Katse, Dr. Kozaburou Nambu, Goon, Jinpei, Joe Asakura, Jun, Ken Washio, Ryu Nakanishi
Genre: Humor/Comedy
Story Warnings: Mild Sexual References
Timeframe: Mid-Series
Universe: Tenuously Canon
Word count: 1067 - Read Count: 1346 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 04/25/2012 - Published: 04/25/2012
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Reviewer: ElectricWhite Signed
Date: 05/01/2012 Title: Chapter 1: Romeo & Juliet does Gatch

I found this piece has a certain charm....and I'm also beginning to wonder if we're somehow distantly related, since our minds seem to have similar quirks!

Author's Response: Hmm similar quirks and obsessions ... scary stuff! Might have to add a "fangirl" branch to the family tree :)

Summary: The team encounters a new foe.  But will they be able to unravel the mysteries of Tripodia before it is too late?
Categories: Battle of the Planets
Series: None
Chapters: 3 - Table of Contents
Characters: 7-Zark-7/1-Rover-1/Susan, Chief Anderson, Colonel Cronus, Jason, Keyop, Mark, Original Character, Phoenix/God Phoenix, Princess, Tiny Harper
Genre: Action/Adventure, Mystery
Story Warnings: None
Timeframe: Mid-Series
Universe: Tenuously Canon
Word count: 2593 - Read Count: 2540 - Completed: No
Updated: 02/22/2013 - Published: 05/09/2012
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Reviewer: ElectricWhite Signed
Date: 05/09/2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

My 11-year-old nephew and I can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thank you or your comments. Chapter 2 is almost done!

Summary: Theoretically, springing a Mecha attack early in the morning is a good idea. Spectra just failed to take into account they were attacking early in the morning...
Categories: Battle of the Planets
Series: None
Chapters: 1 - Table of Contents
Characters: Original Character
Genre: Humor/Comedy
Story Warnings: None
Timeframe: Mid-Series
Universe: Mostly Canon
Word count: 303 - Read Count: 1153 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 06/14/2012 - Published: 06/14/2012
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Date: 06/14/2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh, I almost feel sorry for the bad guys! It never occurred to me to think of what it would be like to cross G-Force before they've had their morning cuppa!

Summary: Do you still think this conflict is all about Good vs. Evil?
Categories: Gatchaman
Series: None
Chapters: 1 - Table of Contents
Characters: Berg Katse, Original Character
Genre: General
Story Warnings: Blood, Guts & Gore
Timeframe: Other
Universe: Alternate Universe
Word count: 5385 - Read Count: 1024 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 07/08/2012 - Published: 07/08/2012
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Reviewer: ElectricWhite Signed
Date: 03/21/2014 Title: Chapter 1: For the sake of future generations

I don't know how this managed to slip past my attention for so long!

This is a deep, thought-provoking piece that will stay in my mind for a long time to come. You never disappoint!

Author's Response: Oh my. I don't know what to say. I'm just so flattered. So, thank you. I'm really happy you feel this way. Really.

Summary: Joe has been known to always have bad luck when it comes to certain things. Girls, his health. Could it really get any worse for him? In his opinion. Yes. Yes it could.

Possible Nose-cola moment. This is a very short fic.
Categories: Gatchaman
Series: None
Chapters: 1 - Table of Contents
Characters: Joe Asakura
Genre: Humor/Comedy
Story Warnings: Nose-Cola Warning
Timeframe: Mid-Series
Universe: Mostly Canon
Word count: 475 - Read Count: 850 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 02/04/2013 - Published: 02/04/2013
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Reviewer: ElectricWhite Signed
Date: 02/05/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Luck of a Condor

I'm trying to picture it. . . oh no! Poor Joe! As if he hasn't suffered enough! I hope it doesn't take very long to grow out. :)

Author's Response: >3

Summary: Follow up to Smitten Swannie, and Mark's view of Princess's kiss.
Categories: Battle of the Planets
Series: None
Chapters: 1 - Table of Contents
Characters: Chief Anderson, Mark, Princess
Genre: Vignette
Story Warnings: None
Timeframe: Mid-Series
Universe: Canon
Word count: 1512 - Read Count: 869 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 09/05/2013 - Published: 09/05/2013
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Date: 09/05/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh dear....it looks like Mark might have been better off if he'd kept his mouth shut about his true feelings for Princess!

Author's Response: I know.... it seems he can't do right for doing wrong, eh? Thanks for your response.

- Hidden Talents by KT1972 - Rated: 8+ - - [Reviews - 5]
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Summary: Is the boys' condemnation of Jun's cooking really justified?
Categories: Gatchaman
Series: None
Chapters: 1 - Table of Contents
Characters: Jinpei, Joe Asakura, Jun, Ken Washio, Ryu Nakanishi
Genre: Character Study, General, Humor/Comedy, Vignette
Story Warnings: None
Timeframe: Other
Universe: Mostly Canon
Word count: 438 - Read Count: 717 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 03/06/2014 - Published: 03/06/2014
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Reviewer: ElectricWhite Signed
Date: 03/06/2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ah, if only they knew...

It gave me a chuckle. Thanks!

Author's Response: You're welcome EW :)

Summary: Can Jun trick the boys into eating her food?
Categories: Gatchaman
Series: None
Chapters: 1 - Table of Contents
Characters: Jinpei, Joe Asakura, Jun, Ken Washio, Ryu Nakanishi
Genre: General, Vignette
Story Warnings: Mild Language
Timeframe: Other
Universe: Mostly Canon
Word count: 1838 - Read Count: 989 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 03/14/2014 - Published: 03/14/2014
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Reviewer: ElectricWhite Signed
Date: 03/14/2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

So this time revenge was best served hot! Tee hee.

Author's Response: Absolutely, she certainly showed them a thing or two, and Jinpei is getting his just deserts too. :)