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Gatchaman Fiction Archive :: TransmuteJun
Penname: TransmuteJun [Contact] Real name: TransmuteJun
Member Since: 05/14/2007
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Bio:

I've been a fan of BOTP for more than 30 years (ouch, am I that old?), but only discovered Gatchaman about four years ago, and started writing fanfic a little over three years ago.

During that time, I've met so many wonderful people on all of the various Gatchaman sites online. I'm thrilled to be part of this archive, and have my work shown alongside some of the best fics out there.

I hope you enjoy my stories as well.

Transmute....


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Reviews by TransmuteJun
- Apple Tree by Terri - Rated: Everyone - - starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 4]
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Summary: While on duty, Princess catches a glimpse of someone who looks oddly familiar...
Categories: Battle of the Planets
Series: None
Chapters: 3 - Table of Contents
Characters: Mark
Genre: Drama, General
Story Warnings: None
Timeframe: Mid-Series
Universe: Canon
Word count: 9525 - Read Count: 4052 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 05/14/2007 - Published: 05/14/2007
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Reviewer: TransmuteJun Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/16/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Apple Tree I

I really enjoyed this fic. There's so little known about Princess' background, and I like the way you brought out the ties to her family, as well as the dilemma she faces upon discovering them.

Summary: A drink offer from Joe lands Ken and Jun in an unexpected situation. Includes a cunning Swallow, a watchful Owl, a matchmaker Condor and a very drunk Swan and Eagle.
Categories: Gatchaman
Series: None
Chapters: 1 - Table of Contents
Characters: Jun, Ken Washio
Genre: Humor/Comedy, Plot-What-Plot, Romance
Story Warnings: Erotica, Explicit Material, Mature Content, Sexual Situations
Timeframe: Other
Universe: Alternate Universe
Word count: 4103 - Read Count: 373 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 05/14/2007 - Published: 05/14/2007
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Reviewer: TransmuteJun Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/16/2007 Title: Chapter 1: One Shot

I love this! But I have one big problem... where's the revenge???? I know you started a draft of it, and I hope you'll post the rest, please!

- After Koji by Springie - Rated: 13+ - - starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
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Summary:

Jun has just killed her beloved friend Koji with a bird missle. How will her teammates help her get over this tragedy?

 


Categories: Gatchaman
Series: None
Chapters: 13 - Table of Contents
Characters: Berg Katse, Dr. Kozaburou Nambu, Jinpei, Joe Asakura, Jun, Ken Washio, Phoenix/God Phoenix, Ryu Nakanishi
Genre: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Story Warnings: Mild Adult Situations, Mild Language
Timeframe: Mid-Series
Universe: Tenuously Canon
Word count: 9367 - Read Count: 19650 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 05/14/2007 - Published: 05/14/2007
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Reviewer: TransmuteJun Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/16/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This fic gave me new insight into the Koji ep. I was wondering right up until the end, whether Koji was really alive, or not! You really know how to keep the reader hooked!

Summary: This was originally written for the April 2003 challenge on Gatchamania. It might look a bit familiar, since it's filked from an article in The Onion.
Categories: Gatchaman
Series: None
Chapters: 1 - Table of Contents
Characters: None
Genre: Humor/Comedy
Story Warnings: None
Timeframe: None
Universe: None
Word count: 709 - Read Count: 1148 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 05/14/2007 - Published: 05/14/2007
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Date: 05/16/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

ROFL! I haven't seen this before, but I'm loving it! What a great idea! Now we know why those goons are so motivated!

Summary:

A/N: Newlyweds will often go to great lengths for each other. The war is over and Ken and Jun are newlyweds, getting adjusted to their new life together... This one was inspired from "real life" events...heehee...This is a one-shot...not to be taken too seriously... just for fun!

 

Note: This fic is image intensive, screenshots and/or drawings are embedded throughout.

 

 


Categories: Gatchaman
Series: None
Chapters: 1 - Table of Contents
Characters: Jun, Ken Washio
Genre: Humor/Comedy
Story Warnings: Mild Adult Situations
Timeframe: Sequel
Universe: Tenuously Canon
Word count: 649 - Read Count: 1917 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 05/14/2007 - Published: 05/14/2007
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Reviewer: TransmuteJun Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/16/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ha ha ha... you had me going! I thought he was looking for *something else*, just as embarassing!

What a great laugh!

Summary:

This story takes place before the team's first mission.What could possibly happen when the team takes a camping trip? Find out,when Chief Anderson suggests they spend a little bonding time together...

 


Categories: Battle of the Planets
Series: None
Chapters: 5 - Table of Contents
Characters: Chief Anderson, Jason, Keyop, Mark, Princess, Tiny Harper
Genre: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Romance
Story Warnings: Mild Adult Situations, Mild Language
Timeframe: Prequel
Universe: Tenuously Canon
Word count: 6163 - Read Count: 5869 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 05/14/2007 - Published: 05/14/2007
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Reviewer: TransmuteJun Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/16/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love this story! What an interesting look into the life of the team, before their first mission! And of course, I'm not protesting the M/P fluff either... ;-)

- Undercover by Springie - Rated: 18+ - - starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
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Summary:

Find out what happens when Mark and Princess are sent to a ski resort on an undercover mission ...posing as newlyweds!

 

NOTE: This fic is image intensive, screenshots and/or drawings are embedded throughout.
Categories: Battle of the Planets
Series: None
Chapters: 8 - Table of Contents
Characters: Chief Anderson, Jason, Keyop, Mark, Princess, Tiny Harper, Zoltar
Genre: Action/Adventure, Angst, Humor/Comedy, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Story Warnings: Adult Situations, Mature Content, Mild Language, Mild Sexual References, Sexual Situations
Timeframe: Mid-Series
Universe: Mostly Canon
Word count: 5708 - Read Count: 11181 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 05/14/2007 - Published: 05/14/2007
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Reviewer: TransmuteJun Signed
Date: 05/14/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oooh.... this one gives me tingles, especially as an Eagle/Swan 'shipper. I love the whole setup, I'm just feeling like *something* is missing... Hmmm..... what could it be? *innocent smile*

Reviewer: TransmuteJun Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/16/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm looking forward to it!

Summary:

During a recovery mission, Jun finds a little girl who needs her desperately. She wants to take her in as a little sister, but how will Jinpei feel about this?

 


Categories: Gatchaman
Series: None
Chapters: 13 - Table of Contents
Characters: Dr. Kozaburou Nambu, Jinpei, Joe Asakura, Jun, Ken Washio, Ryu Nakanishi
Genre: Angst, Drama, Tragedy
Story Warnings: Mild Adult Situations, Mild Language
Timeframe: Mid-Series
Universe: Tenuously Canon
Word count: 8640 - Read Count: 14356 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 05/15/2007 - Published: 05/15/2007
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Reviewer: TransmuteJun Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/16/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is so sweet, and sad too. I can really see how Jun would get attached. I think you've captured the emotions here really well!

Summary:

After getting her shoe back from Katse, Jun believes Katse may be able to identify her. Her fears are confirmed when she hears the latest news report. Will Jun be forced to leave the Science Ninja Team? What will her teammates do to help her?

 


Categories: Gatchaman
Series: None
Chapters: 14 - Table of Contents
Characters: Berg Katse, Dr. Kozaburou Nambu, Jinpei, Joe Asakura, Jun, Ken Washio, Ryu Nakanishi
Genre: Angst, Drama
Story Warnings: Mild Adult Situations, Mild Language
Timeframe: Mid-Series
Universe: Canon
Word count: 8663 - Read Count: 19549 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 05/15/2007 - Published: 05/15/2007
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Reviewer: TransmuteJun Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/16/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Secrets of the Birdstyle has always been my favourite ep! I love the way you've followed up on it, and amde it fit in well with the series. Great job!

- Mind Reading 101 by Springie - Rated: Adult - - starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 3]
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Summary:

New implants will give the G Force team a special new ability...but it's going to take some getting used to. What will happen as they learn to communicate through telepathy?

 


Categories: Battle of the Planets
Series: None
Chapters: 16 - Table of Contents
Characters: Chief Anderson, Jason, Keyop, Mark, Princess, Tiny Harper, Zoltar
Genre: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Story Warnings: Adult Situations, Mature Content, Sexual Situations
Timeframe: Mid-Series
Universe: Tenuously Canon
Word count: 11111 - Read Count: 2473 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 05/15/2007 - Published: 05/15/2007
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Reviewer: TransmuteJun Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/16/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is so much fun! I really laughed in some parts, and there were swoony bits too! And as you know, it inspired one of my longer fics.

- One Last Kiss by Springie - Rated: 18+ - - starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
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Summary:

Another woman threatens Princess and Mark's relationship. Who is she? And what has happened that may make Princess leave Mark for good?

 


Categories: Battle of the Planets
Series: None
Chapters: 13 - Table of Contents
Characters: Chief Anderson, Jason, Keyop, Mark, Princess, Tiny Harper
Genre: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Romance
Story Warnings: Adult Situations, Mature Content, Mild Language
Timeframe: Episode Rewrite
Universe: Tenuously Canon
Word count: 12048 - Read Count: 16706 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 05/15/2007 - Published: 05/15/2007
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Reviewer: TransmuteJun Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/16/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You know how I love this, Springie! You did a great job adapting G1's Andes Love to BOTP! I think my favorite part is at the end, when Prin realizes that she was doing the same thing to Mark, that he did to her. *swoon*

Author's Response: Awwww...thanks, baybee...and it helps to have such a great beta reader! *grin*

- Sweet Dreams by Springie - Rated: Adult - - starstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
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Summary:

This is strictly PWP...written from a challenge by my buddy, Transmute Jun.

I was to write some Ken/ Jun smut, and the setting was to be the God Phoenix...

I tried it, using the "Sea Anemone" episode (where Jinpei disappears in the middle of the night b/c he is so unpopular- LOL)

Warning, though, I am NOT a smut writer...this is one of my first attempts...LOL

 

 


Categories: Gatchaman
Series: None
Chapters: 1 - Table of Contents
Characters: Jun, Ken Washio
Genre: Plot-What-Plot
Story Warnings: Adult Situations, Erotica, Mature Content, Sexual Dialogue, Sexual Situations
Timeframe: Mid-Series
Universe: Canon
Word count: 2203 - Read Count: 344 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 05/16/2007 - Published: 05/16/2007
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Reviewer: TransmuteJun Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/16/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

WHat can I say... you wrote this fic for me, using my *request*... and you totally delivered! This is *just* what the doctor ordered.... hee hee hee....

Summary:

The G Force team members crash land on an island and have to depend on their survival skills. However, they begin disappearing one by one. Who or what is behind this diabolical scheme? Will the team survive?

 


Categories: Battle of the Planets
Series: None
Chapters: 14 - Table of Contents
Characters: Chief Anderson, Jason, Keyop, Mark, Princess, Tiny Harper, Zoltar
Genre: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Romance
Story Warnings: Mild Adult Situations, Mild Language
Timeframe: Mid-Series
Universe: Mostly Canon
Word count: 7980 - Read Count: 16183 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 05/16/2007 - Published: 05/16/2007
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Reviewer: TransmuteJun Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/16/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is so much fun. Sometimes you just need a lighthearted fic like this to remind you how silly the original show was.This is a great read!

Summary:

The GForce team is being trained for battle. However, Don and Jason are not getting along, and Don needs to be replaced. Who will the new team member be? And how will they fit in?

 

 

NOTE: This fic is image intensive, screenshots and/or drawings are embedded throughout.

 

 


Categories: Battle of the Planets
Series: None
Chapters: 20 - Table of Contents
Characters: Chief Anderson, Don Wade, Jason, Keyop, Mark, Princess, Tiny Harper, Zoltar
Genre: Action/Adventure, Angst, Humor/Comedy, Romance
Story Warnings: Mild Adult Situations, Mild Language, Mild Sexual References
Timeframe: Prequel
Universe: Mostly Canon
Word count: 16511 - Read Count: 20761 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 05/16/2007 - Published: 05/16/2007
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Reviewer: TransmuteJun Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/16/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This fic was so good, it inspired me to write a sequel! I love the way you describe the team, and the setting is fun. Not to mention the *tension* between Mark and Princess. I love it!

Summary:

Jun runs into an old friend from the orphanage when she rescues the team from Galactor's clutches. Who is he? And why is he making Ken jealous?

 

 


Categories: Gatchaman
Series: None
Chapters: 32 - Table of Contents
Characters: Berg Katse, Dr. Kozaburou Nambu, Goon, Jinpei, Jun, Ken Washio, Original Character, Phoenix/God Phoenix, Ryu Nakanishi, Sosai X
Genre: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Story Warnings: Adult Situations, Mature Content, Mild Adult Situations, Mild Language
Timeframe: Mid-Series
Universe: Mostly Canon
Word count: 25601 - Read Count: 37308 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 05/16/2007 - Published: 05/16/2007
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Reviewer: TransmuteJun Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/16/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You know how I love this fic! It's the first one of yours I read, and it inspired me to write myself. I think you did a greta job with the character of Neil!

- The Stakes by Diinzumo - Rated: 13+ - - starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
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Summary: (Timeline: the end of Gatchaman Fighter) Ken invites Joe to his old home at the airstrip for a night of drinking and cards. Instead of money, they play for information--the loser must answer any question the winner asks, no matter what. If Joe wins, will he have the courage to ask Ken the one question that troubles him most?
Categories: Gatchaman
Series: None
Chapters: 1 - Table of Contents
Characters: Joe Asakura, Ken Washio
Genre: Character Study, Drama
Story Warnings: Mild Adult Situations, Mild Language
Timeframe: Mid-Series
Universe: Canon
Word count: 4831 - Read Count: 1751 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 05/16/2007 - Published: 05/16/2007
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Reviewer: TransmuteJun Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/16/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really enjoyed this. It's an interesting (and completely in-character) look into Joe and Ken, their relationship, and their behavior. I also like the way you tied it in to the ending of Gatch F.

This fic is a fascinating read!

Summary: (Timeline: Gatchaman #105) Joe fights his final, most difficult battle in a "what-if" ending to the Gatchaman series.
Categories: Gatchaman
Series: None
Chapters: 1 - Table of Contents
Characters: Joe Asakura, Other Canon Character
Genre: Horror
Story Warnings: Blood, Guts & Gore, Death, Mild Language
Timeframe: Episode Rewrite
Universe: Alternate Universe
Word count: 3691 - Read Count: 1519 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 05/16/2007 - Published: 05/16/2007
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Reviewer: TransmuteJun Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/16/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow... I'm just sitting here reeling. What a thought-provoking insight into Joe's 'last' moments... I love the way this both fills in the gaps in the ep, and explains Joe's thoughts as he approached his 'end'. Fascinating!



Author's Response: I had written this for Halloween and was in a particularly sad & spooky frame of mind. I had wanted to do something with Oniishi and Masaki (they were throwaway characters in the series, it seems). Glad you liked it!

Summary: When you're a famous figure like Gatchaman, you have to cope with the inevitable publicity.
Categories: Gatchaman
Series: Publicity
Chapters: 1 - Table of Contents
Characters: Ken Washio
Genre: Character Study
Story Warnings: None
Timeframe: Mid-Series
Universe: Canon
Word count: 1367 - Read Count: 1846 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 05/17/2007 - Published: 05/17/2007
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Reviewer: TransmuteJun Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/27/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Your take on the whole 'pblicity department' issue is interesting. It really does make you think how much work the ISO put into keeping their identities secret. Now if only their civvies/uniform designers could figure out that thr number t-shirts REALLY aren't a good idea... ;-)

Author's Response: Yeah, I'm not confident I can come up with a convincing reason for the numbered t-shirts and monotonous wardrobe. Thanks for the compliments!

Summary: Race driver "Condor Joe" offers his point of view on his public facade. Shares the same timeframe as "Publicity 1."
Categories: Gatchaman
Series: Publicity
Chapters: 1 - Table of Contents
Characters: Joe Asakura
Genre: Character Study, Vignette
Story Warnings: None
Timeframe: Mid-Series
Universe: Canon
Word count: 1280 - Read Count: 1777 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 05/24/2007 - Published: 05/17/2007
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Reviewer: TransmuteJun Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/27/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really like this entire series, but this one is my favourite. You've tied in the whole Condor Joe Racer image well with canon, and made it seem believable. I also like the way this ties in with Ken's publicity fic.

- Breakdown by Barrdwing - Rated: 8+ - - starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 2]
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Summary: Joe is on the road trip from h*** when he tries to deliver a car for a friend and it breaks down in the middle of nowhere.
Categories: Gatchaman
Series: None
Chapters: 1 - Table of Contents
Characters: Joe Asakura
Genre: Action/Adventure, General
Story Warnings: None
Timeframe: Mid-Series
Universe: Mostly Canon
Word count: 4216 - Read Count: 1573 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 05/18/2007 - Published: 05/18/2007
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Reviewer: TransmuteJun Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/24/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

An interesting take... a 'normal' situation for 'normal people', but something Joe is quite unused to. It just brings home his inability to be 'normal', whether he wants to or not.

Of course, now I'm wondering what's been happening at home while he's been gone. Surely everyone is wondering where he is... 

Summary: 7-Zark-7 gets a reluctant human assistant, who is less than thrilled with the Tin Can or his pet dog.
Categories: Battle of the Planets
Series: None
Chapters: 7 - Table of Contents
Characters: 7-Zark-7/1-Rover-1/Susan, Jason, Keyop, Mark, Original Character, Phoenix/God Phoenix, Princess, Tiny Harper, Zoltar
Genre: Action/Adventure, Character Study, Drama, Humor/Comedy, Mystery
Story Warnings: Mild Language
Timeframe: Mid-Series
Universe: Canon
Word count: 41390 - Read Count: 8286 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 05/18/2007 - Published: 05/18/2007
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Reviewer: TransmuteJun Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/14/2008 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Answers

What an interesting perspective! I love the mission part in the latter half of this fic, and the POV of an outsider unfamiliar with how the team operates.

I have to say though, it doesn't seem like it's finished to me... I'd love to see more resolution of what Theresa is experiencing and the 'real' reason for her 'promotion'. Something just doesn't sit right with me about that whole thing...

I really enjoyed reading this.

Summary: Ken and Joe try to convince Nambu to give them their old vehicles back.
Categories: Gatchaman
Series: None
Chapters: 2 - Table of Contents
Characters: Dr. Kozaburou Nambu, Jinpei, Joe Asakura, Jun, Ken Washio, Ryu Nakanishi
Genre: Action/Adventure, Humor/Comedy
Story Warnings: Mild Language, Mild Sexual References, Mild Violence
Timeframe: Mid-Series
Universe: Alternate Universe, Tenuously Canon
Word count: 1209 - Read Count: 1842 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 05/19/2007 - Published: 05/19/2007
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Reviewer: TransmuteJun Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/17/2007 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

ROTFL! I love this! Just the laugh I needed after a long day. Aces!

Summary: Mark's still missing, and a rebuilt G-Force has to carry on the fight against Spectra.
Categories: Battle of the Planets
Series: Cath's Battle AU
Chapters: 9 - Table of Contents
Characters: Chief Anderson, Don Wade, Jason, Keyop, Mark, Original Character, Princess, Tiny Harper
Genre: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama
Story Warnings: Blood, Guts & Gore, Mild Adult Situations, Mild Language, Violence
Timeframe: Sequel
Universe: Alternate Universe, Mostly Canon
Word count: 19983 - Read Count: 9423 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 05/26/2007 - Published: 05/26/2007
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Reviewer: TransmuteJun Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/27/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really enjoyed reading this on the BOTP list, and am looking forward to the next piece in your overall plotline. I have to confess that, for me, the most interesting part was what happened with Don. I'm waiting to see what he does with that luminous paint... ;-)

Summary: Jason's still grounded, and seriously unhappy about it, when a chance comment from Mark gives him a chance to prove himself.
Categories: Battle of the Planets
Series: Cath's Battle AU
Chapters: 4 - Table of Contents
Characters: Jason, Mark, Original Character
Genre: Drama
Story Warnings: Mild Adult Situations, Mild Language
Timeframe: Mid-Series
Universe: Alternate Universe, Tenuously Canon
Word count: 11583 - Read Count: 4636 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 05/26/2007 - Published: 05/26/2007
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Reviewer: TransmuteJun Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/28/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I've been reading through your AU, and this fic really stood out for me the most. I'm not sure what it is, but I love the insight into Jason: dealing with his illness, wanting to be useful, and still having a need to compete with Mark and show him his own worthiness.

At the same time, your depiction of Rick is compelling. We can all identify with his feelings of being an outsider, and wanting to be with the 'in crowd'... and he has his chance, only because Jason has temporarily been 'rejected' too. This really got to me personally, and I could completely relate to the way he felt.

In general, I love the character of Rick. I think I have a little crush on him. ;-) 

In any case, I am loving your AU!