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Gatchaman Fiction Archive :: cathrl
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Penname: cathrl [Contact] Real name: cathrl
Member Since: 04/29/2007
Membership status: Administrator
Bio:

Very long-time BotP fan (I remember the initial run on the BBC when I was nine). More newly a fan of Gatchaman, but far from an expert, and I've only seen the first series.

I'll beta-read anything rating-wise, but I'm not comfortable discussing explicit stuff. So, if it's a small part of your fic, that'll just be one part I won't comment on. If it's a big part of your fic, you're probably better off getting someone else to beta it. Happy with AUs, OCs etc. - but I will tell you if they don't work for me. Drop me an email if you're interested - but, I'll be honest, I'm not the beta for you if you're going to be upset by being told where I see weaknesses plot and character-wise. I do more than just proofread.

Really recommend you go into my fic by clicking on "Series" - because it does have a definite order, and it's sorted correctly in there.

 


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Summary:

Zoltar launches an insidious attack against the upper echelons of Galaxy Security.  Mark has to hold his team together, even though he feels as though he's falling apart, himself.

Co-authored with Mark Stalter and archived with permission.

This story forms part of the BotP: 2163 series. Click on the series link below to view the recommended reading order.


Categories: Battle of the Planets
Series: Battle of the Planets: 2163
Chapters: 9 - Table of Contents
Characters: 7-Zark-7/1-Rover-1/Susan, Chief Anderson, Colonel Cronus, Jason, Keyop, Mark, Original Character, Princess, Tiny Harper, Zoltar
Genre: Action/Adventure, Character Study, Drama
Story Warnings: Adult Situations, Death, Mild Language, Mild Violence
Timeframe: Sequel
Universe: Alternate Universe
Word count: 38951 - Read Count: 15709 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 05/24/2007 - Published: 05/14/2007
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Reviewer: cathrl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/30/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This came up on the random generator, and I'd forgotten it to the extent I was surprised to see I'd been a beta-reader.

But I very soon remembered loving it. Great storyline, and your OCs fit so well that they just "belong".

A very happy rediscovery.

Summary: Sequel to Two-Factor Theory. With Joe incarcerated as part of a court-martial for destroying ISO equipment, Ken is abducted by Egobossler, leaving the team crippled and confused. And Egobossler's working on Galactor's most devastating operation yet!
Categories: Gatchaman
Series: Defiance
Chapters: 11 - Table of Contents
Characters: Dr. Kozaburou Nambu, Egobossler, Jinpei, Joe Asakura, Jun, Ken Washio, Phoenix/God Phoenix, Ryu Nakanishi
Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Slash
Story Warnings: Adult Situations, Sexual Situations, Slash, Strong Language, Torture, Violence
Timeframe: Mid-Series
Universe: Mostly Canon
Word count: 13307 - Read Count: 18947 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 05/17/2007 - Published: 05/17/2007
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Date: 05/18/2007 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Ken

OMGWOW!

Bet you never thought you'd see a fangirl drool review from me :) Just brilliant. Fabulous, plausible plot, lots of nods back to canon, and a relationship where it's entirely clear what's going on without needing naming of body parts.

Poor old Jun, though.

Oh, I loved that. Best new Gatch fic I've read in ages.

Reviewer: cathrl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/24/2007 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Ken

And I just figured out where the rating gets set - duh!

- Leaders Never Fail by jublke - Rated: Everyone - - starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
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Summary:

Set two years before G-Force's first mission, Spectra is just a bizarre theory postulated by Chief Anderson.  Mark is a "regular" teen trying to juggle the responsibilities of school with secretive training for a theoretical war with alien life.  Mark is bright and capable and used to taking care of himself.  So what happens when he starts to fail a subject at school?      


Categories: Battle of the Planets
Series: Feathered Hearts
Chapters: 3 - Table of Contents
Characters: Jason, Mark, Original Character, Princess
Genre: Angst, Character Study, General
Story Warnings: None
Timeframe: Prequel
Universe: Tenuously Canon
Word count: 2303 - Read Count: 4383 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 05/18/2007 - Published: 05/18/2007
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Reviewer: cathrl Signed
Date: 03/22/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This just popped up on the random story selection, and I had to read it again.

And it made me smile. "Unless you're on fire, it can wait" was hilarious...and I loved that Mark genuinely hasn't noticed that Jason's good at something in school, and that Jason's not bothered to tell him.

And why do I suspect that what Jason's doing in his room with the music blaring is studying? Not that he'd ever admit it...



Author's Response: Thanks, Cath.  I've been enjoying re-reading some of yours lately, too.  I was just watching an episode of BotP last night and once I saw Cronus, I had to laugh.  I remembered that line of Paula's in Breakdown -- "At least they didn't ask me to wear the hat."  LOL.

- Defiance by Katharine - Rated: 18+ - - starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 28]
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Summary: Jay makes his final stand as his cerebonic implants begin to fail and Gallactor launches a catastrophic offensive. 
Categories: Gatchaman, Battle of the Planets
Series: The Disturbediverse
Chapters: 16 - Table of Contents
Characters: Chief Anderson, Devil Star/Galaxy Girl, Dr. Kozaburou Nambu, Jason, Jinpei, Joe Asakura, Jun, Ken Washio, Keyop, Mark, Princess, Ryu Nakanishi, Tiny Harper
Genre: Character Study, Drama, Epic
Story Warnings: Explicit Material, Graphic Violence, Mature Content, Strong Language
Timeframe: Mid-Series
Universe: Alternate Universe
Word count: 107832 - Read Count: 42037 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 11/20/2012 - Published: 05/19/2007
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Date: 05/29/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Running on Empty

What can I say other than "aaaargh!!!"?

That was such a good idea... waddaya mean it didn't work? (sob)

Edit: and that was, of course, aimed at chapter 5.10...

Summary:

Set during Gatch I, before Katse manages to construct a machine that will force the team out of birdstyle so he can see who they are. Let’s just say he had some false starts along the way…landing Joe in the BotP universe.  

This is in response to the "It was a dark and stormy night" challenge.  Heaven knows I can't write anything short enough to qualify as a vignette.  *grin*


Categories: Gatchaman, Battle of the Planets
Series: None
Chapters: 7 - Table of Contents
Characters: 7-Zark-7/1-Rover-1/Susan, Chief Anderson, Joe Asakura, Keyop, Mala/S-9, Mark, Phoenix/God Phoenix, Princess, Tiny Harper
Genre: Humor/Comedy
Story Warnings: Strong Language
Timeframe: Mid-Series
Universe: Alternate Universe
Challenges: It was a dark and stormy night
Word count: 6446 - Read Count: 9096 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 05/24/2007 - Published: 05/24/2007
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Date: 05/26/2007 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Ow - I'm hurting from laughing! I just loved Mark being prissy about Joe swearing, and Joe getting all the terms "wrong".

Please tell me there is a sequel to this! Two sequels! I want to see Jason in the Gatchaman universe and how Joe reacts to being called Dirk Daring.



Author's Response:

Thanks, everybody!

I'm kind of thinking who I'd like to land in the Eagle Riders universe.  

"Eagle Riders, what's our mission?"

"To defend the global good!"

Joe: *face-palm* "Someone please shoot me..."

Summary:

Story Extract;

The moonlight bouncing of his body only highlighted his ruggedly handsome face that showed a maturity and experience far beyond his 25 years.

Joe put his hands on the window sill and looked out over the city view of the bay area. He had not had that dream for at least a year now. But before it was hard to remember any real details from it, and the conversations he could not repeat when he was awake.But tonight the voices were clear, kind of, at least he remembered the words. The woman had an accent but he could not pick it.

He looked back at the beautiful woman who had recently come into his life.She did not know him really, so much of his life he could not tell her… so much he wanted to, but feared he would lose her if she knew.

His secrets could destroy the one real love he has ever had in his life…..

 

original character/all the Gatchaman team/Count Egobossler

Romance/angst/action

Illustrated by author.


Categories: Gatchaman
Series: The Final Battle.
Chapters: 12 - Table of Contents
Characters: None
Genre: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Romance
Story Warnings: Adult Situations, Mature Content, Mild Violence, Sexual Situations
Timeframe: Mid-Series, Sequel
Universe: Tenuously Canon
Word count: 30528 - Read Count: 15200 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 07/16/2007 - Published: 06/11/2007
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Reviewer: cathrl Signed starstarstar
Date: 06/11/2007 Title: Secret lives

I liked this - you've made Madeline into a real, believable person and someone who I could imagine Joe falling for. And the tie into Red Impulse was an interesting twist.

I do think it would benefit from a bit more proofreading (you've spelt Joe's surname at least 3 different ways, and there are a lot of mis-spelt and missing words) and also a bit more consistency especially with the background - is Madeline a soloist or a member of the orchestra?

The other thing which caught my attention was the very start - there's a detailed physical description of Joe, but nobody there to be observing him. All the rest of your writing is strongly from the point of view of one or the other of them, and this stood out as odd. 

But i don't want to put you off - I'm a nitpicking reviewer, and this fic really caught my attention. You have an engaging writing style and I look forward to more! 

Summary:

What's it like to be a Galactor goon?

Excerpt

His body was rigid, standing stiffly, ready to bow at a strict forty-five degree angle when their Sire passed by. He could hear every word Lord Katse uttered.

“Hmmm… this looks like shoddy workmanship.” the Galactor Leader was saying. “How am I supposed to deliver these mecha on Leader X’s schedule when I have such incompetents working for me?”

The purple cape approached, and he made the requisite bow, a formal greeting of “Sire” passing his lips at the exact moment the Galactor Overlord passed by. Out of the corner of his eye, he saw his fellow squad members doing the same. No one wanted to catch Lord Katse’s attention. The concept of anonymity among the ranks had never been so appealing, as it was now.

 


Categories: Gatchaman
Series: Origins
Chapters: 15 - Table of Contents
Characters: Berg Katse, Goon, Jinpei, Jun, Original Character
Genre: Action/Adventure, Character Study, Drama
Story Warnings: Blood, Guts & Gore, Death, Mild Language, Mild Sexual References, Mild Violence, Strong Language
Timeframe: Mid-Series
Universe: Canon
Word count: 23298 - Read Count: 13837 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 07/12/2007 - Published: 07/11/2007
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Reviewer: cathrl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 07/17/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I already reviewed this one over on the ML - but I'll review it again, because it was that good!

A believable goon who has more to him than comedy relief but isn't a cackling bad guy either. I'd say more, but I don't want to post spoilers...I loved it.

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Categories: Orphan
Series: Feathered Hearts
Chapters: 0 - Table of Contents
Characters: None
Genre: None
Story Warnings: None
Timeframe: None
Universe: None
Word count: 0 - Read Count: 0 - Completed: No
Updated: 12/31/1969 - Published: 12/31/1969
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Reviewer: cathrl Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 01/29/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Episode One

Different, and definitely interesting. I do want to see where this is going. Normally mixing tenses doesn't work for me, but in this case the jump to first person present really does. And I have a very nasty suspicion about who this person is...

Just a couple of queries: why is this "all warnings" when there's nothing sexual in sight and it's only rated13+? It makes the warning system pretty meaningless if you don't have some sort of stab at selecting those that are appropriate. Also, you have three short chapters here. They'd make much more sense submitted as chapters instead of separate stories. And the third one has some fairly considerable formatting problems - bold and underlined is hard to read. You might consider editing that one in particular.

Looking forward to more of this! 



Author's Response: Thank you for your review, I truly appreciate it. The reason its not in chapters, is because I wanted to give it the feel of a comic book, or a serial. I didn't realize when I posted it that the bold and underline was through the whole story. I've gone back over it and fixed it. I'm glad people are reading, and enjoying it..... Thank you.

- Sacrifices by evangelina - Rated: 13+ - - starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
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Summary: This can be blamed on a challenge over at Gatchmania: Condor and Swan get 'closer' in the G1. The Eagle sees them, but what is his reaction? Does he confront them?
Categories: Gatchaman
Series: None
Chapters: 1 - Table of Contents
Characters: Dr. Kozaburou Nambu, Jinpei, Joe Asakura, Jun, Ken Washio, Ryu Nakanishi
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Warnings: Adult Situations, Mild Adult Situations, Sexual Situations
Timeframe: Mid-Series
Universe: Canon
Word count: 3163 - Read Count: 2071 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 03/12/2008 - Published: 03/12/2008
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Reviewer: cathrl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/24/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Excellent!

There's a real sense that they're losing this war and know it, and I could absolutely buy Jun starting to resent the people they're trying to protect.

I know it wasn't the request - but what I most liked about this wasn't the romance bits at all, it was Jun growing a spine and refusing to allow Ken to carry on being a one man team. There's a reason there are five of them. But Joe's reasoning made perfect sense too, in an ice-cold way - he'd rather lose one of them than both. Brr. The fandom could use a whole lot more fic set in the later series...especially when it's this good.

Summary:

This is part of my Blood Line series. While one member of G-Force may have met the love of his life, another may have met the one that will kill him.


Categories: Battle of the Planets
Series: Blood Line
Chapters: 15 - Table of Contents
Characters: Chief Anderson, Don Wade, Jason, Keyop, Mark, Original Character, Princess, Tiny Harper
Genre: Angst, Romance
Story Warnings: Graphic Violence, Mature Content, Sexual Situations, Violence
Timeframe: Mid-Series
Universe: Alternate Universe
Word count: 24296 - Read Count: 22859 - Completed: No
Updated: 06/23/2013 - Published: 10/29/2008
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Reviewer: cathrl Signed
Date: 11/23/2008 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I don't know the other fandom at all, but I enjoyed this. Poor old Jason's having a rough time with those migraines at the moment. And I like the AU wth Don as part of the mix.

 I'm a bit confused, though. Tara seems to be being fairly obvious about what she is - does she assume Jason knows or not? Or does she just not care?

Enjoying the story - and I'd much like to see this variant of the Battle crew in mission mode.



Author's Response: Hi Catherine. I actually have a reason for Jason's migraines in this series that's new, but that's for a later story. Tara's story will be explained further in the next few parts. As for the mission - this one will be personal.   

Reviewer: cathrl Signed
Date: 05/25/2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

"Dismantle enemy ships" indeed. Snigger.

 Still much enjoying this.



Author's Response: Thanks Catherine. He was telling the truth...

Summary: An explosion sends G-Force through a wormhole one hundred and twenty years into the future. A crossover with Star Trek Enterprise.  
Categories: Battle of the Planets
Series: None
Chapters: 9 - Table of Contents
Characters: Jason, Keyop, Mark, Princess, Tiny Harper
Genre: Action/Adventure
Story Warnings: None
Timeframe: Time Travel
Universe: Cross-Over
Word count: 15272 - Read Count: 12540 - Completed: No
Updated: 06/12/2014 - Published: 03/18/2009
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Date: 03/19/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This can't be good... and yes, they absolutely would do it if there was any reasonable chance of succeeding.

 Okay, I'm hooked. Looking forward to more!



Author's Response: Thanks Catherine. I'm a real big fan of Enterprise and just couldn't get the story out of my mind.

Summary: This is basically a re-imagining of the series in my point of view.I wish to keep it as canon as possible while also being as original as I can be.
Categories: Gatchaman
Series: None
Chapters: 5 - Table of Contents
Characters: Berg Katse, Dr. Kozaburou Nambu, Jinpei, Joe Asakura, Jun, Ken Washio, Kentaro/Red Impulse, Ryu Nakanishi
Genre: Action/Adventure
Story Warnings: Blood, Guts & Gore, Graphic Violence
Timeframe: Prequel
Universe: Mostly Canon
Word count: 2830 - Read Count: 5461 - Completed: No
Updated: 07/17/2009 - Published: 05/21/2009
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Date: 05/29/2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2-Five Birds Gather Part 2

Not for me, I'm afraid. This could use a _lot_ more proofreading (spelling Phoenix wrong in the title isn't a good start) and these unpleasant people simply aren't the characters I recognise. Ken's reaction to being told he made a mistake is to punch the flight instructor? Even more bizarre; the flight instructor is casually rude to his student about his dead father? Joe goes out of his way to prolong a fight for several hours? Why aren't all those bikers on the floor inside thirty seconds?

What I'm seeing here is someone self-inserting themselves being casually unpleasant to all around them, defeating their enemies and gloating about it, and being selected as if it's a positive character trait. It isn't. The KNT are not these nasty people, and nobody would select these unpleasant brats for anything. I really recommend you consider what sort of people would end up in the sort of close team we see in the show, and what positive traits you think you are illustrating here which would cause anyone to select these kids for anything at all. I'm not seeing any.

 

Summary: The day after Mark's plane crashes Tiny attempts to help him recover.
Categories: Battle of the Planets
Series: None
Chapters: 1 - Table of Contents
Characters: Chief Anderson, Colonel Cronus, Mark, Tiny Harper
Genre: Action/Adventure
Story Warnings: Mild Language
Timeframe: Prequel
Universe: Alternate Universe
Word count: 5780 - Read Count: 1583 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 07/30/2009 - Published: 07/29/2009
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Reviewer: cathrl Signed
Date: 08/05/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice story - and definitely good to see Tiny stepping up, thinking for himself, and doing the right thing. I'm pretty sure getting back in the air would be something that would work for Mark, and I liked him being "economical with the truth" over how much authorisation he had to take the jet.

I was confused by whose son Mark is here - Anderson's or Cronus's? And, to be honest, he's a bit of a drip throughout this, with no real indication that he's a superior candidate at anything. Doesn't he have _any_ good qualities of his own? A few signs that there might be some strength there doesn't really translate to "commander of Earth's top strike team". On this showing, Tiny's a better candidate.

Where's Don? You have Mark drop his name as if he's one of the team, but then at the end the "four heads" thing makes it sound as if Anderson thinks of them as a team of five.

To my mind you could also have lost the profanity with no effect on the story at all - at which point, why use it? It's a story which would have no need for a rating at all except for random use of the F word.

And now I've nitpicked - but I do that when I enjoy something. Good story and I look forward to more.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review Cathrl.  You have picked up on a few things I am still trying to sort out in my AU namely Don's appearance/non-existance at this point in the timeline and Mark's change in attitude from this "drip", as you call it, to the strong Commander we all know. Hopefully some of my other stories will show those "flares of strength" that Anderson sees to explain to readers Mark's change in attitude.

 

As for which of the two is Mark's biological father, in my AU - neither.  Story to come some day, maybe.  Makes for a great story with Mark feeling betrayed by both the men he feels he could trust.

 

 

Summary: The Science Ninja Team went on vacation.
Categories: Gatchaman
Series: None
Chapters: 1 - Table of Contents
Characters: Berg Katse, Dr. Kozaburou Nambu, Sosai X
Genre: Humor/Comedy, Plot-What-Plot
Story Warnings: None
Timeframe: Mid-Series
Universe: Tenuously Canon
Word count: 174 - Read Count: 1427 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 07/12/2010 - Published: 07/07/2010
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Date: 07/24/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Sometimes the funniest stories are the ones where everything isn't spelt out. Visions of llama catching, and indeed llama poo sorting. Lovely. Snigger.

Author's Response: Or just how Katse ended up covered with llama spit.

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Summary: When a seperatist faction arises in the Federation, Keyop and his family are caught in the middle of it.
Categories: Battle of the Planets
Series: Gatchamaniacs
Chapters: 9 - Table of Contents
Characters: Chief Anderson, Jason, Keyop, Mark, Mary Sue, Original Character, Other Canon Character, Phoenix/God Phoenix, Princess, Tiny Harper, Zoltar
Genre: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Self-Insertion
Story Warnings: Adult Situations, Mild Adult Situations, Mild Language, Mild Sexual References, Mild Violence
Timeframe: Sequel
Universe: Alternate Universe
Word count: 28628 - Read Count: 8207 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 07/13/2010 - Published: 07/12/2010
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Date: 07/24/2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

That was great fun! Much enjoyed the story, and your depiction of Keyop as an adult. I did get rather lost with all the non-canon characters, but I suspect that's because I haven't read any of your other stories.

And she definitely isn't a Mary Sue!



Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it, Cathrl. Yeah, the non-canon characters are even sometimes hard for me to keep up with, and I've been around some of them for months now. I'm starting to think that most of the characters in Gatchamaniacs have become developed enough now that very few of them could truly be classed as Mary Sues anymore, but I alway feel safer warning people that she shares a few things in common with me, but not many.:) Thanks again for reading.

Summary:

Part of TJ's and LB's episode reviews:   Anxious about his health problems –and trying to hide them- Joe skips out on a mission to go see an unlicensed doctor.  Meanwhile, Dr. Nambu finally figures out Katse’s deepest secret…


Categories: Gatchaman
Series: LB's and TJ's Episode Reviews
Chapters: 2 - Table of Contents
Characters: Berg Katse, Dr. Kozaburou Nambu, Jinpei, Joe Asakura, Jun, Ken Washio, Ryu Nakanishi, Sosai X
Genre: Episode Review
Story Warnings: Mild Violence
Timeframe: Mid-Series
Universe: Cross-Over
Word count: 6312 - Read Count: 9459 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 01/22/2011 - Published: 01/22/2011
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Date: 01/24/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I don't say this often enough, but I do so appreciate having these. Loads of screencaps and an easy reference for everything that goes on. Thank you.

Author's Response:

And thank you -I'm glad you find them useful!  I consult these recaps myself for quick reminders of who said or did what and in which episodes, and the BOTP recaps that I started doing partway through really revived and refreshed that series and its characters in my mind, as I'd hadn't watched it much since I was a kid.

Summary: "Gatchaman Episode 41: Murder Music" hits a sour note.
Categories: Gatchaman
Series: ElectricWhite's Episode Rewrites
Chapters: 1 - Table of Contents
Characters: Berg Katse, Dr. Kozaburou Nambu, Goon, Jinpei, Joe Asakura, Jun, Ken Washio, Other Canon Character, Ryu Nakanishi
Genre: Humor/Comedy, Parody
Story Warnings: Crude Humor, Drug References, Mild Language, Mild Sexual References
Timeframe: Episode Rewrite
Universe: Mostly Canon
Word count: 4235 - Read Count: 1532 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 01/29/2011 - Published: 01/28/2011
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Reviewer: cathrl Signed
Date: 01/31/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

So, when did you go to my kids' primary school concerts?

I howled with laughter all the way through this. Excellent. Loved the retcons too, for _why_ the technology used is so outdated. And Sosai channelling Barry Manilow makes me want to scrub my brain.

This is a compliment, btw :D

Summary: Berg Katse crashed down and wandered into a house deep in the woods. This is a heartwarming story of his bonding with its inhabitants. Or maybe not. With the Science Ninja Team on his trail and facing the secrets of the mansion, will he ever see the light of the day again?
Categories: Gatchaman
Series: None
Chapters: 31 - Table of Contents
Characters: Berg Katse, Jinpei, Joe Asakura, Jun, Ken Washio, Original Character, Ryu Nakanishi, Sosai X
Genre: Action/Adventure, Horror
Story Warnings: Blood, Guts & Gore, Mature Content, Strong Language, Violence
Timeframe: Mid-Series
Universe: Alternate Universe
Word count: 63903 - Read Count: 52338 - Completed: No
Updated: 06/30/2013 - Published: 03/08/2011
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Reviewer: cathrl Signed
Date: 03/11/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - The Crash

Intriguing!

Well-written, and I'm looking forward to seeing where you take this.



Author's Response: Thank you very much. I hope that the fact that I decided to post this one will make me actually finish it.

Summary: All the news you really need to know in lovely Ameris!
Categories: Gatchaman
Series: None
Chapters: 1 - Table of Contents
Characters: Original Character
Genre: Humor/Comedy, Plot-What-Plot
Story Warnings: None
Timeframe: Mid-Series
Universe: Tenuously Canon
Word count: 539 - Read Count: 1389 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 03/26/2011 - Published: 03/26/2011
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Date: 05/05/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ow, my ribs hurt! Howling over the God Phoenix violating the Ten Commandments.

:D

Summary: When the ISO can't determine what is making Jason sick, Anderson takes him to an old colleague, Dr. Greg House.
Categories: Battle of the Planets
Series: None
Chapters: 17 - Table of Contents
Characters: Chief Anderson, Jason, Keyop, Mark, Princess, Tiny Harper
Genre: Drama
Story Warnings: Mild Adult Situations
Timeframe: Mid-Series
Universe: Mostly Canon
Word count: 44883 - Read Count: 18778 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 12/19/2015 - Published: 03/26/2011
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Reviewer: cathrl Signed
Date: 03/30/2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Ooh, I'm enjoying this! Poor old Jason.

I like that you've tackled something most of us carefully gloss over - nobody noticing the implant in this sort of situation.



Author's Response: Noticing or ignoring...that is the question! I'm glad you're enjoying this, Catherine.

Reviewer: cathrl Signed
Date: 04/20/2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

EWW! In his HEAD?

Oh. My. Word. Poor old Jason. 

That really is the stuff of nightmare.



Author's Response: Hi Catherine. Another EWWWW! This fic is working just as I hoped. I wanted to come up with something different to explain Jason's problems. Hope you're enjoying it!

Reviewer: cathrl Signed
Date: 06/07/2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Allow me to say EWWW WORMS!!! a few more times...

Get them OUT of him - you're making me all crawly. 

This is a compliment, btw :)



Author's Response: I'm so glad you're enjoying, Catherine. It's going to be a little while longer before he gets some releif. Angst in buckets for a while.

- The Music Class by jublke - Rated: Everyone - - starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
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Summary: During a toddler's music class, Jason reflects on his new life since the end of the war with Spectra.  (Includes a wonderful image by Springie.)
Categories: Battle of the Planets
Series: The Heart Has Its Reasons ...
Chapters: 1 - Table of Contents
Characters: Jason, Mary Sue, Princess
Genre: Character Study, General, Plot-What-Plot, Romance, Vignette
Story Warnings: None
Timeframe: Sequel
Universe: Alternate Universe
Word count: 1736 - Read Count: 1969 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 05/26/2011 - Published: 05/25/2011
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Date: 05/29/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That strange sound you hear across the Atlantic is me shrieking.

You got me :)



Author's Response: Hee hee hee!  I'll admit, it is a bit different than what I've currently got you beta-reading.  ;)  I think I'm going to have to add a new series to store this story in.  My husband helped with the ending.  Glad to see that it had an impact, although I'm not exactly sure that shrieking was the desired outcome ... LOL.