Reviewer: gatchamarie Signed
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
LB, what a lovely and ingenious story! An episode in itself and one that completely captured my full attention! ... it's also based on one of the things I like doing most in my life, that is cooking! I thank you for such an enjoyable read and also for all the cooking tips! No matter what you may say, I imagine you to be a great cook yourself as you knew well what you were talking about! And you managed to make me feel as taking part of a professional cooking challenge myself, like the shows I watch on tv! I also liked how the story flowed and the way things ended up ... so different from what I thought would have happened in the beginning! I like to be surprised! LOL, at first I even thought that Myrtle could have been Berg Katse in disguise but then I couldn't have tollerated the fact that the two of them could have gotten intimate! Another thing I enjoyed was the way you've decribed Ken and Joe's friendship by a single episode. And you also made me chuckle every time Joe came up with the excuses his other Teammates had offered him regarding the "Fern" name! I so pitied the Condor, though! Even if this time he had not ended up with the wrong person or with a Galactor woman, he still couldn't share a life with her! Fortune in love didn't knock at his door for yet another time! Great work, LB! Keep it up!
Thank you! I really didn't know what I was talking about -I procured a massive tome by the French Culinary Institute and a Julia Child cookbook from the library and used them for recipes and cooking tips. The nature of Joe and Ken's friendship always interests me as I think Ken is the person on the team who's closest to Joe and understands him best.
I am glad you were surprised!