Penname: Ebonyswanne [Contact] Real name: Ebonyswanne
Member Since: 05/26/2007
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Bio:

I love creative writing, I have no ambitions to become a serious writer, so I do this purely for fun... But who knows! LOL

I'm from NSW Australia. I spent time growing up with a backdrop of coal mines, vineyards and cattle grazing lands and various farms. Salt of the Earth kinda people. This is the place where I watched my favourite TV show as a kid BOTP.

 

My drean guy was the Eagle. Those blue eyes and dark locks... sighs heavily. I always wanted them to be together. I felt they were secretly in love when I was a kid and have been pairing them ever since...

I am a fan of Eagle/swan pairing (as you may have guessed)

I love Gatchaman, as the characters have real issues that are not brushed over as easily...

 I love to read other peoples fan fictions, its what inspired me write one. :) 

Thank you for taking the time to read my stories.  

Thank you Tatsunoko for creating such great characters in Gatchaman.

 

 



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Summary:

What's it like to be a Galactor goon?

Excerpt

His body was rigid, standing stiffly, ready to bow at a strict forty-five degree angle when their Sire passed by. He could hear every word Lord Katse uttered.

“Hmmm… this looks like shoddy workmanship.” the Galactor Leader was saying. “How am I supposed to deliver these mecha on Leader X’s schedule when I have such incompetents working for me?”

The purple cape approached, and he made the requisite bow, a formal greeting of “Sire” passing his lips at the exact moment the Galactor Overlord passed by. Out of the corner of his eye, he saw his fellow squad members doing the same. No one wanted to catch Lord Katse’s attention. The concept of anonymity among the ranks had never been so appealing, as it was now.

 


Categories: Gatchaman
Series: Origins
Chapters: 15 - Table of Contents
Characters: Berg Katse, Goon, Jinpei, Jun, Original Character
Genre: Action/Adventure, Character Study, Drama
Story Warnings: Blood, Guts & Gore, Death, Mild Language, Mild Sexual References, Mild Violence, Strong Language
Timeframe: Mid-Series
Universe: Canon
Word count: 23298 - Read Count: 48289 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 07/12/2007 - Published: 07/11/2007
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Date: 07/15/2007 Title: Chapter 15: Epilogue

I like the poster for it...which one is Kito??

This is a fun story to read, I just like the way that TJ has done her goon in a way that makes him human in his goofy moments(and who does not make stupid decisions at one point in thier life especially as a teenager.)

But Kito was a person that Jun may have been friends with at one point in her life because they had a common interest.

I like that he starts out so normal and in the same place as the birdies but takes a totally different path, but want significance. He just goes about it all wrong. 

The classic is the way he gets promoted...a must read for the person who is looking for a fic from the other side... 

Great story TJ... 



Author's Response:

Which one is Kito in the poster? You'll have to ask Springie, since she made it! *grin*

I'm glad you liked it! This was a bit of a stretch for me (in terms of my writing abilities) and I'm happy that it turned out as well as it did. 

Summary:

Ken and Jun are friends with privileges, but lately, something has been missing with this agreement. A PWP, not be taken seriously.

Sequel of sorts from my other fic The Condor's Matchmaking Schemes


Categories: Gatchaman
Series: None
Chapters: 1 - Table of Contents
Characters: Jun, Ken Washio
Genre: Humor/Comedy, Plot-What-Plot, Romance
Story Warnings: Adult Situations, Mild Language, Sexual Situations
Timeframe: Sequel
Universe: Mostly Canon
Word count: 1994 - Read Count: 433 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 08/10/2007 - Published: 08/09/2007
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Date: 08/12/2007 Title: Chapter 1: One shot

Yes that is a good read and I enjoyed the story thanks for sharing it and I look forward to more from you Arios!

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Date: 08/12/2007 Title: Chapter 1: One shot

Yes that is a good read and I enjoyed the story thanks for sharing it and I look forward to more from you Arios!

- Prom Night by TransmuteJun - Rated: Adult - - starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
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Summary:

Who is taking Princess to the Prom? And will Zoltar crash the party?

Excerpt

"What else have you learned?" asked the Great Spirit.

"The most important piece of information we have ever discovered about G-Force." bragged Mala.

"And what is that?" sighed Zoltar.

"They wear t-shirts."

"T-shirts?" cried Zoltar sarcastically. "You mean, they're teenagers in t-shirts? Oh, that really narrows it down for us!"

"Apparently, these t-shirts have numbers on them." added Mala, rather crossly. She was quite miffed that her brother wasn't taking this entire discussion seriously. No wonder Spectra had suffered one humiliating defeat after another, under his leadership!

"Numbers." repeated Zoltar. "Is that all you've got?"

 


Categories: Battle of the Planets
Series: None
Chapters: 21 - Table of Contents
Characters: Colonel Cronus, Jason, Keyop, Mala/S-9, Mark, Original Character, Princess, Tiny Harper, Zoltar
Genre: Humor/Comedy, Plot-What-Plot, Romance
Story Warnings: Erotica, Mature Content, Mild Adult Situations, Mild Language, Mild Sexual References, Mild Violence, Sexual Situations
Timeframe: Mid-Series
Universe: Mostly Canon
Word count: 30553 - Read Count: 2804 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 08/11/2007 - Published: 08/10/2007
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Date: 08/12/2007 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

TJ you are one of my Favourite authors! 

TJ I am a Gatch girl but I like to read BOTP fics as the are better than the series.(Shoot me down if you want to anyone, but it is a compliment to the writers who do it better than Sandi Frank!)

If you are looking for a fic that has ALL the fun and romance and action than read this one!

TJ has done a good job with the plot, and as a reader, I enjoyed the mirrored scenes between the Spectrans and G-Force, as they were clever and well thought out to the irony of events that unfolded in the story!...and if you want to know about those then I suggest  you read it!

- Bliss by Dei - Rated: 8+ - - starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
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Summary: Bliss: the state of being sixteen, having your own place, your own wheels and most of what a sixteen-year old could want. Well, almost...
Categories: Battle of the Planets
Series: None
Chapters: 1 - Table of Contents
Characters: Jason, Mark, Original Character
Genre: Humor/Comedy
Story Warnings: None
Timeframe: Prequel
Universe: Canon
Word count: 968 - Read Count: 2534 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 08/18/2007 - Published: 08/18/2007
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Date: 11/13/2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I read this one on the older site where you couldn't leave reviews. An old favourite. I couldn’t remember who wrote it until I found it here. Well done.  

- Galactor by TransmuteJun - Rated: 8+ - - starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
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Summary: My first (and only) Gatchaman poem!
Categories: Gatchaman
Series: None
Chapters: 1 - Table of Contents
Characters: None
Genre: Poetry
Story Warnings: None
Timeframe: Mid-Series
Universe: Canon
Word count: 35 - Read Count: 3116 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 09/16/2007 - Published: 09/15/2007
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Date: 09/16/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Galactor

It is simple, but it tells the story...I am not expert on poetry but to me I feel the coming storm with the line "Pouring out of the mouth of some strange creature"

I can see the team standing there ready to take them on! Poetry is not easy, but then TJ you have shown yourself to be good at creating pictures with words. 

 

- Inhibitions by TransmuteJun - Rated: Adult - - starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
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Summary:

When the Condor is administered a Galactor drug, the consequences are unexpected.

Excerpt

“Don’t move.” ordered the Swan, as she aimed her sonic gun at Gel Sadra’s position.

But the Galactor Leader was too well-practiced at escape to surrender. Snarling, she flipped her billowing cape around herself, using the distraction to open a hidden panel in the wall. Gel Sadra felt a blast from the Swan’s weapon scorch her leg as she ran, but was able to close the opening behind her, preventing her enemy’s pursuit.


Jun was frustrated by Gel Sadra’s escape, but her primary concern was Joe.

“Are you all right?” she asked, as her teammate thrashed on the table in front of her.

His eyelids snapped open and he stared disbelievingly into her face.

“Jun…” he whispered, grabbing her shoulders tightly. “You’re real…”


Categories: Gatchaman
Series: None
Chapters: 26 - Table of Contents
Characters: Gel Sadra, Joe Asakura, Jun, Ken Washio
Genre: Angst, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Story Warnings: Adult Situations, Drug References, Erotica, Explicit Material, Mature Content, Mild Adult Situations, Mild Language, Mild Sexual References, Mild Violence, Sexual Dialogue, Sexual Situations
Timeframe: Mid-Series
Universe: Canon
Word count: 50330 - Read Count: 9460 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 09/17/2007 - Published: 09/16/2007
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Date: 09/17/2007 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

This was fantastic TJ, not just another swooney fluffy story (though swooney is good and can always fit in a great story) :) but it had a purpose and everything to do with the plot, and your twists in the story...

But you know me I love twists, and the unexpected. :)

I liked the mission and how it all indicated to why Jun and Ken had such a strange relationship...I don't want to give anything away here.

But Gatchaman did have a focus on relationships at times throughout the series, and I like it how you showed depth to them in this story.

Thumbs up from me!!!!  

- Nice by TransmuteJun - Rated: 13+ - - starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
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Summary:

Ken struggles with his emotions concerning a special someone.

Excerpt

We slipped through the base, easily taking out the few goons we came across. Between my Birdrang and Jun’s yo-yo, we were an unstoppable team.

I almost halted in my tracks, thinking that. I had never realized it, but it was true. We were both on the Science Ninja Team, but in a way, Jun and I were a team within the team. We balanced out each other’s strengths and weaknesses, and worked perfectly together.

Maybe that’s why we were the ones with the white wings.

 


Categories: Gatchaman
Series: None
Chapters: 31 - Table of Contents
Characters: Berg Katse, Jinpei, Joe Asakura, Jun, Ken Washio
Genre: Angst, Character Study, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Story Warnings: Mild Adult Situations, Mild Language, Mild Sexual References, Mild Violence, Sexual Situations
Timeframe: Mid-Series
Universe: Canon
Word count: 26222 - Read Count: 63480 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 09/25/2007 - Published: 09/24/2007
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Date: 09/26/2007 Title: Chapter 31: And it's feeling so nice... so nice

TJ you know that I have already reviewed this, but I really liked how you got into Ken's head with this...I loved how you named each chapter after a verse of your fav song and the lyrics really are a Ken and Jun love story.

NICE is almost deceptive for the title because it is the name of the Song, but I hope readers will understand that it all relates to his emotions, and how he wants so much to express them...mmm I hope I am not giving away to much!

Well the ending is worth reading the entire fic for! Thanks  for sharing a moment in our fav characters life...oh and I almost forgot the flashbacks and how the add depth to the story and the plot! 

 

Summary: Jun, Ken and Joe must go undercover in a local tea room to find out why the geisha who work there have gone missing. Will they make it out alive?
Categories: Gatchaman
Series: None
Chapters: 17 - Table of Contents
Characters: Berg Katse, Devil Star/Galaxy Girl, Dr. Kozaburou Nambu, Goon, Joe Asakura, Jun, Ken Washio
Genre: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Tragedy
Story Warnings: Mild Adult Situations, Mild Language, Mild Sexual References, Mild Violence
Timeframe: Mid-Series
Universe: Mostly Canon
Word count: 27955 - Read Count: 64609 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 10/21/2007 - Published: 10/21/2007
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Date: 04/28/2008 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Awe that was fantastic girls! You make a great team when it comes to writing stories.

Sorry it took me so long to review the whole story. I got side tracked. Poor Joe and Ebony, but its the price a girl pays when the Condor falls for her... kinda like a Bond girl.

Summary:

This was a joint effort with Transmute Jun and Springie.My version gives the Condors insight as to what happens when 3 close friends wind up on a favorite ski resort. Only to find that Spectra is never to far away.Hopefully I can pick all the correct warnings etc.


Categories: Battle of the Planets
Series: Snowbound
Chapters: 16 - Table of Contents
Characters: 7-Zark-7/1-Rover-1/Susan, Chief Anderson, Jason, Keyop, Mark, Princess, Tiny Harper, Zoltar
Genre: Angst, Drama, Mystery
Story Warnings: Adult Situations, Mild Adult Situations, Mild Language, Mild Sexual References, Sexual Dialogue, Sexual Situations
Timeframe: Mid-Series
Universe: Tenuously Canon
Word count: 28647 - Read Count: 60303 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 11/12/2007 - Published: 11/12/2007
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Date: 11/19/2007 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I loved this series! I glad you finally posted this here, and loved how you worked the story in with the other two. Fantastic and I can't wait to see more!

Summary:

Zoltar has a new plan to eliminate G-Force. Can Mark stop him?

Excerpt

“This doesn’t exactly seem like a critical location to destroy.” Mark commented.

“Trust me, the entire base will be destroyed just as if Jason had shot one of the TBXs at it.” Princess said as she worked. “But this location is more geologically stable, and not likely to cause the planetary structure to crumble.”

“I just think the Chief didn’t want me to shoot any missiles.” Jason grumbled. “No one around here lets me have any fun.”

“I think fun’s coming our way!” Mark told him as he listened at the door. “I hear someone coming!”

“Oh, good, I was starting to think that the Happiness Boys didn’t like us anymore.” Jason smirked.


Categories: Battle of the Planets
Series: None
Chapters: 50 - Table of Contents
Characters: 7-Zark-7/1-Rover-1/Susan, Chief Anderson, Great Spirit, Jason, Keyop, Mala/S-9, Mark, Original Character, Phoenix/God Phoenix, Princess, Tiny Harper, Zoltar
Genre: Action/Adventure, Epic, Humor/Comedy, Plot-What-Plot
Story Warnings: Crude Humor, Mild Adult Situations, Mild Language, Mild Sexual References, Mild Violence
Timeframe: Mid-Series
Universe: Canon
Word count: 78927 - Read Count: 157086 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 12/21/2007 - Published: 11/28/2007
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Date: 12/18/2007 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

TJ this is the best BOTP story that you have done so far. What a plot! I just love how you put serious and humour together all in the one story...what more can I say!

And the switches you did in this, this story is well worth reading until you get to the end, don't skip bits or you'll miss some of the best parts. :) big grins from me on this one TJ.

And I can't believe there was no smut in it! LOL 



Author's Response: Well, you know, I have to write a fic without smut in it SOMETIMES.... LOL!

Summary: Sequel to Grief. Jun remembers her fallen friend during the holidays.

Excerpt:

We had left him there, on that cold Himalayan plain; left him alone, to die without the rest of us, even though I had always promised myself that I would never abandon him if he needed me.

He had needed me.

I had let him down.

Of all of the times to listen to Ken, instead of to my heart, I had chosen the worst one possible.

Maybe, if I had stayed with him…

I had been down this road before. Maybe… what if… could have been… I just didn’t know what would have happened had I stayed with Joe. We had never found his body. Perhaps he had been buried in some deep chasm created by the earthquakes. And I would be dead too…


Categories: Gatchaman
Series: Christmas-themed fics, Joy to the World
Chapters: 5 - Table of Contents
Characters: Jinpei, Joe Asakura, Jun, Ken Washio, Ryu Nakanishi
Genre: Angst, Character Study, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Tragedy
Story Warnings: Mild Language
Timeframe: Mid-Series
Universe: Canon
Word count: 7170 - Read Count: 18334 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 12/03/2007 - Published: 12/03/2007
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Date: 12/06/2007 Title: Chapter 5: Epilogue

TJ I'm really enjoying this series, You have a really good nack for telling both sides of a story. To tell you the truth it started out in a way that I thought was predicatable. But now you have proven me wrong and I want to read the next part of this trilogy just to see how it all comes out. Good work!

Author's Response: Well, if I can keep the Queen of plot twists guessing, then I guess I'm onto something! *grin*

Summary: Jun and the team discover the stange breed known as "Fanfic Writers".
Categories: Gatchaman
Series: None
Chapters: 1 - Table of Contents
Characters: Jinpei, Joe Asakura, Jun, Ken Washio, Ryu Nakanishi
Genre: Humor/Comedy
Story Warnings: Mild Language, Mild Sexual References
Timeframe: Other
Universe: Tenuously Canon
Word count: 1596 - Read Count: 3204 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 12/22/2007 - Published: 12/22/2007
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Date: 10/23/2017 Title: Chapter 1: Fanfics and Bird People

I like Ryu's wit in it and the twist at the end. Too funny and I think the pairing worked in it. 

Joe and Ken really did act like jerks in it. It worked. Lol 

Summary: A psychological writeup I did for Joe a few years ago.  This is what an "intake" (aka initial interview) report looks like in a psychological practice or hospital.
Categories: Gatchaman
Series: None
Chapters: 1 - Table of Contents
Characters: Joe Asakura
Genre: Article
Story Warnings: None
Timeframe: Mid-Series
Universe: Canon
Word count: 1436 - Read Count: 4922 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 12/25/2007 - Published: 12/25/2007
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Date: 10/25/2017 Title: Chapter 1: Intake Writeup

So the final assessment is he should be in a psyc ward. Medicated on anti-psychotics and a few other drugs. He wss messed up poor Joe. Some how he cared. Goes to show how complex humans are. 

Summary: Joe is bitten -- and turned -- by a vampire. With a splinter of the Vampire Nation plotting an alliance with Galactor and Joe prepared to kill himself --literally -- to find a cure, Ken must confront his former lover and learn the truth.
Categories: Gatchaman
Series: Vampire Nation
Chapters: 9 - Table of Contents
Characters: Berg Katse, Dr. Kozaburou Nambu, Jinpei, Joe Asakura, Jun, Ken Washio, Original Character, Ryu Nakanishi
Genre: Angst, Drama, Horror, Romance
Story Warnings: Adult Situations, Blood, Guts & Gore, Death, Explicit Material, Mature Content, Sexual Dialogue, Sexual Situations, Strong Language, Violence
Timeframe: Mid-Series
Universe: Alternate Universe, Mostly Canon
Word count: 25171 - Read Count: 34916 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 01/05/2008 - Published: 01/05/2008
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Date: 01/13/2008 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 15

This is a great story...I could go on and on about why I like it, lets just say that Aleksandra is a very well developed original character...I loves all the confrontaions and Joe's reaction to be a very agressive vampire...I could picture it.  And I still sensed that even though the story is finished it could be a trilogy if you chose to do another part to it...thanks for sharing Eva.

- The Present by Madilayn - Rated: 18+ - - starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
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Summary: It's Princess' 21st birthday. Jason decides to give her the gift she's always wanted.
Categories: Battle of the Planets
Series: None
Chapters: 1 - Table of Contents
Characters: Chief Anderson, Jason, Keyop, Mark, Princess, Tiny Harper
Genre: Drama, Humor/Comedy
Story Warnings: Adult Situations, Sexual Dialogue, Sexual Situations
Timeframe: Mid-Series
Universe: Mostly Canon
Word count: 6126 - Read Count: 3912 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 01/24/2008 - Published: 01/24/2008
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Date: 02/02/2008 Title: Chapter 1: The Present

I read this on another site and I loved you twist in this story. Maddy you are a very good writer, I like your style :)

Summary: It's springtime in Utoland, and Joe has met a girl. But will this fledgling romance last, especially with Galactor about to unleash a new and deadly plot against the Science Ninja Team? Nothing, of course, in Utoland can ever be easy...
Categories: Gatchaman
Series: None
Chapters: 2 - Table of Contents
Characters: Dr. Kozaburou Nambu, Jinpei, Joe Asakura, Jun, Ken Washio, Mary Sue, Ryu Nakanishi
Genre: Action/Adventure, Drama, Romance
Story Warnings: Death, Sexual Situations, Strong Language, Violence
Timeframe: Mid-Series
Universe: Mostly Canon
Word count: 13728 - Read Count: 6405 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 02/05/2008 - Published: 02/05/2008
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Date: 02/12/2008 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Poor Joe! he aways gets the worst with women doesn't he.

I liked your story very much, and I liked how you showed the way Jun can connect with them when she realizes a team member is hurting. It would be Jun to kick him up the butt and tell him to get the beach...mmm the Condor in board shorts, now that is one for the imagination!!!! 



Author's Response: Thank you!  With Jun, I was thinking of that scene in Gatchaman ep. 98 where Joe is sitting on a grassy hill behind Nambu's house, miserable, and Jun comes out and tries to talk to him, without success.  In my version, he's downed some scotch and she's already twigged to what's happened, so it goes a little better.  I'm in awe of the sheer scope of your stories, Ebonyswanne -to me, 13000 words felt really long!

Summary: The war is over but things have not gone quiet as Princess thought they would so she takes a new assignment that leads to more trouble than she thought possible.
Categories: Battle of the Planets
Series: Descent into Darkness
Chapters: 16 - Table of Contents
Characters: Original Character, Princess
Genre: Tragedy
Story Warnings: Adult Situations, Blood, Guts & Gore, Death, Graphic Violence, Torture, Violence
Timeframe: Other
Universe: Tenuously Canon
Word count: 19446 - Read Count: 2054 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 02/09/2008 - Published: 02/09/2008
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Date: 04/07/2009 Title: Chapter 16: I hate doctors

You did publish it here after all FB!! great story well presented I can't wait to see how this whole series concludes.

Summary: Released from prison Princess starts her recovery and tries to pick up some pieces of her life.
Categories: Battle of the Planets
Series: Descent into Darkness
Chapters: 18 - Table of Contents
Characters: Chief Anderson, Original Character, Princess
Genre: Angst
Story Warnings: Mild Violence
Timeframe: Other
Universe: Tenuously Canon
Word count: 23331 - Read Count: 2492 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 05/27/2009 - Published: 02/10/2008
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Date: 02/17/2008 Title: Chapter 11: Cassie explains

they have to end up together! Ypu know what I mean FB, this is a really good story, and I can't prdict the ending...I can't wait to read more!

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Date: 04/20/2017 Title: Chapter 18: Set back

I read this story years ago when it was first written. Reading it again I got different things from it. Different eyes reading it. 

Emotionally powerful story. I read didn't like Mark in it. Jason was at least caring about her return but not honest with her. Overall well written. 

 

Summary:

This was the very first BOTP story I wrote and I unfortunately managed to lose the other two parts but I hope to rewrite them soon.

Princess has been accused of being a traitor 

 


Categories: Battle of the Planets
Series: None
Chapters: 1 - Table of Contents
Characters: Princess
Genre: General
Story Warnings: None
Timeframe: Other
Universe: Tenuously Canon
Word count: 1777 - Read Count: 3606 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 02/10/2008 - Published: 02/10/2008
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Date: 06/17/2017 Title: Chapter 1: Enemy Within - Traitor

Its good premises. If you ever decide to continue it, its a worthy plot. Wonder who the real traitor is. 

 

I'm wondering if the Eagle realizes how he truly feels for her through all of this. Or if she is given a dearh sentence will the team brak her out? 

- End of an Era by Firebird - Rated: 13+ - - starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
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Summary:

A short story written from the perspective of Chief Anderson.


Categories: Battle of the Planets
Series: None
Chapters: 1 - Table of Contents
Characters: Chief Anderson, Jason, Keyop, Mark, Princess, Tiny Harper
Genre: General
Story Warnings: None
Timeframe: Other
Universe: Tenuously Canon
Word count: 1198 - Read Count: 2890 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 02/10/2008 - Published: 02/10/2008
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Date: 10/02/2017 Title: Chapter 1: End of an Era

I rememebr reading this years ago and not sure why I didn't leave a review. Beautifully written, you do anguish and deep feeling fics very well. 

- Evolution by TransmuteJun - Rated: Adult - - starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
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Summary:

Princess doesn't feel quite like herself... and neither does Mark.

Excerpt

“Princess, listen, about what Mark said yesterday…”

Princess stiffened, and Jason could hear her sharp intake of breath. He chose to forge ahead anyway, knowing that he only had a few moments before the Commander finished receiving his last minute instructions in the Docking Bay.

“Look, the guy is clueless, okay?”

Princess sighed, and Jason could see her head nodding slightly. Encouraged, he took a deep breath and continued.

“I was worried about you, when I saw you run out of Jill’s. I wanted to go after you, but figured it probably wasn’t such a great idea.”

“Thanks.” muttered Princess quietly, a hint of pink staining her cheeks.
 

 


Categories: Battle of the Planets
Series: None
Chapters: 28 - Table of Contents
Characters: Chief Anderson, Colonel Cronus, Jason, Mark, Princess
Genre: Angst, Drama, Plot-What-Plot, Romance
Story Warnings: Erotica, Mature Content, Mild Adult Situations, Mild Language, Mild Sexual References, Mild Violence, Sexual Dialogue, Sexual Situations
Timeframe: Mid-Series
Universe: Canon
Word count: 39389 - Read Count: 7120 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 02/21/2008 - Published: 02/10/2008
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Date: 02/23/2008 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

This full of innuendos and the right kind of tension!!!! I like the way you are showing the confusion in the emotions that are coming to life....I can't wait to read more...

Author's Response: Ah, but far more than innuendoes once we get into it... 

Summary:

What does Ken want from Jun?

 Written for the February, 2008 issue of Birdscramble. (the 'Naughty' issue)


Categories: Gatchaman
Series: None
Chapters: 1 - Table of Contents
Characters: Jinpei, Jun, Ken Washio
Genre: Angst, Humor/Comedy, Romance
Story Warnings: Mild Adult Situations, Mild Language
Timeframe: Mid-Series
Universe: Canon
Word count: 1475 - Read Count: 3225 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 03/04/2008 - Published: 03/04/2008
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Date: 03/05/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is a great teaser TJ, he deserved what he got in the end for her, I loved the build up of tension and emotions that drew you into the story and it had a twist, which I love to see in ficcies 

Besides how could he not be hot for a woman who stands up to him like she did!

Summary:

Joe discovers that he and Kelly make a good team; but not good enough.

Excerpt

Joe snorted, seemingly nonplussed by the Hawk’s enraged tone. “And here I thought we were a ‘team’.”

“A team whose unity you undermine every time you are with us!” Hunter spat. “I’m sick of turning around to find that you’ve gone off on some other secret mission that not even Dr. Keane knows about! I’ve had it with your tendency to ignore my orders whenever it suits you! I’m not going to stand for your insolent attitude anymore!”

Joe’s fist drew back.

“Going to hit me, are you?” Hunter smirked. “Isn’t that what you usually do, when you don’t agree with me, Joe? You punch me in the gut and then go on with whatever you wanted to do anyway.”


Categories: Eagle Riders
Series: None
Chapters: 9 - Table of Contents
Characters: Goon, Hunter Harris, Joe Thax, Kelly Jennar, Mallanox, Mickey Dugan, Ollie Keeawani, Original Character, Thaddeus Keane, Ultra Eagle
Genre: Action/Adventure, Angst, Character Study, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Story Warnings: Adult Situations, Blood, Guts & Gore, Graphic Violence, Mild Adult Situations, Mild Language, Mild Sexual References, Mild Violence, Strong Language, Violence
Timeframe: Mid-Series
Universe: Canon
Word count: 13234 - Read Count: 33560 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 03/05/2008 - Published: 03/05/2008
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Reviewer: Ebonyswanne Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/05/2008 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Quote; 

"A small flame flickered inside of Kelly, steadily growing stronger as Joe carefully tended to it, until it burned of its own accord, being sustained by the physical and emotional response the Dove was having to the Falcon’s actions."

That is why you write romance so well TJ...need I say to much more, it has a good flow and plot to the story...