Date: 03/07/2010 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 2
When you answer a question, you answer it thoroughly, don't you? :D
Overall a good read. There were a few little punctuation errors in there that need fixing at a later date. Interesting to see the characters from an outsider's point of view.
You know what they say – be careful what you ask for, you just may get it. <laugh>
Ironically, I’m glad the question was asked. I might not have written this part of the story otherwise. Exploring the darker part of the team’s psyche is never fun or easy.
Thanks for reading.