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Reviewer: ghost owl Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2010 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 2

When you answer a question, you answer it thoroughly, don't you? :D

Overall a good read. There were a few little punctuation errors in there that need fixing at a later date. Interesting to see the characters from an outsider's point of view.

Author's Response:

You know what they say – be careful what you ask for, you just may get it. <laugh>

Ironically, I’m glad the question was asked.  I might not have written this part of the story otherwise.  Exploring the darker part of the team’s psyche is never fun or easy.

Thanks for reading.   

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