[Report This]Date: 04/01/2014 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 1
I like the amount of reason in this assassin's approach. The way she's always tried to kill only those considered deserving, and to make sure others understood why. It's interesting that in the end her family's bloodline wins out. Would love to see some glimpses of their future. :)
[Report This]Date: 08/23/2010 9:20 AM Title: Chapter 1
Such a lovely story! I like your idea behind the assassination of Joe's parents! And, what a twist at the end! Great job!
[Report This]Date: 08/21/2010 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wonderful story! I like the twist at the end. I hope there is more!
[Report This]Date: 08/21/2010 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 1
I liked this very much, Meridian. So Joe's aunt changed her mind.
Date: 08/21/2010 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 1
Meridian, this is great I like the introspective thoughts going through the "Devli Stars" head while she completes her assignment.
Did you intend to have Francesca change to a different personality when she doned the Devil Star outfit? Or at least have a different name - Stella Diavolo. Or did I misunderstand something.