Well I read it all in one go. I like the idea and Kerri falling for Jaze - I don't know if you planed it but I expected it before the Enthrallment with Jessie. I loved the way Jaze is such a gentleman and the little snippets we're getting of his past. Then again we all know who he is. For our Condor it must be shear agony.

I do however find myself speed reading whole paragraphs. I guess I want to get the the romantic stuff but it's so intimately entwined with Spectra on the planet and the final show down your preparing us for, I feel a big issue just waiting to happen in the wings between Jessie/Jaze/Kerrie.

I'm not sure how you're going to reintegrate Jason into the team, especially with one Imprinted and one Enthralled woman at his side. The children side plot is developing into a major stumbling block, as will be pologimy when he returns to earth.

I can't wait to see how this ends.

Author's Response: Hi Lyssa.  We're glad you're enjoying it.