




Date: 07/09/2011 10:28 AM Title: Chapter 5 : Every parents nightmare.
I love he way you're focusing on Nambu's concern over Joe's injury, and what he is going through as he sees one of his children suffering. You've really painted a full character profile of the doctor right here in chapter 5!
Author's Response: Thanks TJ. I'm glad you are enjoying this.





Date: 06/18/2011 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 5 : Every parents nightmare.
This is getting better and better. It's well written and I love reading the connection between Joe and Nambu.