Date: 12/02/2012 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
An interesting interpretation of how Mark and Jason react to stress. I like that Jason gets calmer the worst it gets.
Date: 11/25/2012 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 1
A really nice character exploration here. :) Pretty spot on!
Date: 11/24/2012 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love this little vignette! Short, no description other than what comes through in the dialogue, yet it says so much. Two men good at what they do, and yet so different. This little slice of life shows it wonderfully.
I'm so glad I hoard email! :D
Date: 11/24/2012 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wonderful! I like the anonymous point of view, and how this could be just about anywhere during the war or later training. Thank you for finding and sharing this.