Reviews For Under the Surface
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Reviewer: cathrl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/12/2014 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 1

This is great! Very much in the spirit of the episodes, plausibly nasty pseudoscience, and great in-character interactions.

Much enjoyed.

Reviewer: K2p2 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/05/2014 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 1

Nice story, it reads like an episode or a chapter in a graphic novel, all it needs now is illustration!

My only nits with it was when a part of the Godphoenix got disabled by the crystalization process that it didn't seem to effect the ships flight any..... that and that the local coast guard, or whatever version they have was not alerted when the Salt went missing in weird circumstances... A good solid 8 of a story though! Enjoyable reading.

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