Date: 03/18/2014 12:23 AM Title: An appropriate level of response
Loved this rewrite! So much better than the ep!
You explained why Princess didn't seem to be up to snuff in that one, and why Mark ditched the whip. *And* you made Zark useful - bravo!
Author's Response: Thank you for your review, kittenmommy :) The episode was full of "what the -?" moments which needed ironing out, but my favourite part was where the technician gets to switch Zark OFF.