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Reviewer: Chris White Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2014 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 1

How did I never review this? I love how you've taken Don's "defection" and made it much less selfish and black and white. Add in Jason's migraine problems and the foreshadowing of Mark's problems and they're quite the train wreck, but given what they go through, that's not really a shock!

Reviewer: jublke Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2011 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wonderful story.  I like how you've given Don a life and a real purpose - he's not just a side show, but an integral part of the team's history.

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