Reviews For Cupid's Cable Gun
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Reviewer: jublke Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 08/12/2012 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 1

This piece is charming, witty and delightful, laden with details that add depth to the characters without detracting from the plot.  I would have liked to see the thread about the games wrapped up, but I can almost overlook it because the scene on the rooftop is priceless.  Nicely done.  :)

Author's Response: I'm afraid I painted myself in to a corner with the war games thread. Maybe some day, with a lot of technical advice. Thanks for your review.

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