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Reviewer: Chris White Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2012 4:30 AM Title: Epilogue

Aw it's so nice to see a story where Joe and Ken both find happiness with their ladies. :) And I liked how you tied her in with the RI squad. Definitely gave her a "family" feel for the rest of them instead of making her an outsider.

Reviewer: mandy1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/28/2008 11:40 AM Title: Epilogue

Where's the shower scene in chapter two? It doesn't come up. :-(

Author's Response:

I posted this story ages ago, but it should be there! I'll have to check, if it's not I'll fix it. ASAP.


Reviewer: Springie Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/16/2007 10:23 PM Title: Epilogue

I realy enjoyed this one, Ebony! The shower scene was steamy...and I was tickled to read that Madeline has curly copper hair (like me)...

I don't want to give spoilers, but I like the way you had a Red Impulse connection and a little of Ego intertwined into the story as well.


Congrats on a great fic! 

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it, most of my dolls have copper red curly hair and green or blue eyes. I think it is a very pretty look for a girl...

Reviewer: TransmuteJun Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/11/2007 3:49 PM Title: Introduction

I know this sounds strange, but I like this more than Friends and Lovers. You'vre really brought a wonderful depth to Joe's character, and the way he has changed and matured over the three Gatch series. And yes, i love the swoony stuff with Madeline! Excellent!

Author's Response: Hi there TJ. Thank you for the review, I even have a proof reader now so better things to come!

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