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Reviewer: Chris Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/22/2012 7:23 PM Title: Part 2

I like your take on their meeting, :) I've always wondered how Ken had ended up at an orphanage when it sounded like Nambu took him.

Reviewer: Julieann Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 10/24/2007 2:10 PM Title: Part 2

In part one, there is a little part that says: "Do you know You'd only be putting yourself in danger, and your father didn't want that.". Looks like something is missing in there.

I remember reading this from years ago, and it was fun to reread it. Talk about 2 kids who have been, for the most part, way too serious for too much of their lives.

Author's Response: Thanks!  Yeah looks like several paragraphs went AWOL.  Have put them back in now but it would not let me format the text so who knows what it looks like.  lol! 

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