Reviews For Pain and Loss
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Reviewer: Chris White Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/08/2012 12:10 AM Title: Part 1

I adore this piece just as much the second time through. I think you really nailed just how hurt he should have been, something they skimmed over a bit too much. All that stuff about protecting him just didn't hold water after a while. He's freaking Gatchaman, not some helpless kid.

Author's Response: Hee! Thanks. Yeah, there was no way this was just going to go away instantly. I do love filling holes! 

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