Date: 04/07/2012 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 1
The characterizations in this feel spot on. I like this look at how not everyone in Galactor is a total monster, and the team (especially Ken) certainly takes enough risks that this scenario could have happened. I loved Joe's solution to Jun's sliidng toward the abyss, too. :) He's lucky he didn't get mauled like a lion tamer.
Author's Response: Dang, you're trying to OD on my stuff aren't you? :P Yeah, Joe does like to push the envelope. Hee hee! Do appreciate all the reading! Thanks!!!!!