Reviews For Galactor
Reviewer: Springie Signed 
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Date: 09/17/2007 5:43 PM Title: Galactor
[Report This]Date: 09/17/2007 5:43 PM Title: Galactor
Loved it, baybee!! My favorite lines are..."A flood of green
Pouring out of the mouth of some strange creature"...very graphic!! I think you should do more poetry!!
Reviewer: Ebonyswanne Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2007 3:33 AM Title: Galactor
[Report This]Date: 09/16/2007 3:33 AM Title: Galactor
It is simple, but it tells the story...I am not expert on poetry but to me I feel the coming storm with the line "Pouring out of the mouth of some strange creature"
I can see the team standing there ready to take them on! Poetry is not easy, but then TJ you have shown yourself to be good at creating pictures with words.