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Reviewer: Becky Rock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/19/2009 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 1

Jason told Susan quite a bit about himself in Liars, but I was wondering, does she know about his attempted suicide, either from gossip, the Chief or from accident from Jason's mind? I'm just curious.



Author's Response: She does know, but I can't remember when exactly she found out or who told her. It's been so long since I wrote these stories that I'd have to unearth my old notes to figure out when. I don't think they kept it a bit secret, though.

Reviewer: Becky Rock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/29/2008 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 1

I forgot two things. First, this is really the Chief's fault.  He is the one who forced them together. Second, this might be the first time in Jason's life he's really happy.

Reviewer: Becky Rock Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2008 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 1

Ah, Jane, I loved it! Just what I was looking for. Some of the comments were great. I especially liked Jason telling Susan he'd gotten her pregnant and her return that she kind of hoped to be an active participant if it ever happened. I also liked the fact Jason never once thought about the Chief's opinion or reaction, or that of any of the others either. he didn't think it was any of their business, but that's not the same as being concerned about what they thought. But I would like to know when Susan came to the realization she had feelings for Jason? She did let him stay at her place the one night in Liars. More, please?

Reviewer: lborgia88 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2008 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 1

This is a wonderful addition to your series.  You write the most achingly sweet, tormented and vulnerable Jason; he wrenches and melts my heart every time.

Author's Response: Thanks--it's hard to know how much to put on him sometimes.

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