Date: 05/02/2012 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
Beautiful, painful, and poignant. Your characterization of Mark here comes closest to how I see him and reminds me of why, long before I was a Condorphile, I had a crush on the Eagle. My only complaint is that there isn't more ... when are those other pieces coming?
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I said I was slow. ;) I dust the other parts off and then get stuck. Then work and kids get in the way. I keep at it though. So someday.