Reviews For Extraction II
Reviewer: Cricket Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2011 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 1
Date: 03/13/2011 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 1
A fun read. Poor team. Smart Mark.
Reviewer: ghost owl Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2009 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
Date: 01/04/2009 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
Nice bit of battle-spackle here, Catherine. Your short pieces form interesting little fillers for your universe and I liked the 'dice' explanation. Nitpick: you introduce your MI operative as 'Colonel James' in one para, then refer to him as 'Jones' in the dialogue before returning to 'James' at the end. Overall a gently amusing piece to read.
Reviewer: Becky Rock Signed 
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Date: 01/02/2009 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 1
[Report This]Date: 01/02/2009 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is fantastic! A great twist - hiding in plane sight. I loved the refernece to the Mole mech. Using dice to come up with costumes was brilliant.