Date: 08/21/2014 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is amazingly good! I can totally see how an incident like this would trigger a realization. Love your action sequences, very descriptive. Your characters are so well crafted and I think you care about them very much. It definitely comes through in your writing....
Date: 05/28/2007 11:07 AM Title: Chapter 1
I've loved this fanfic ever since it ran in Bird Scramble. As G-1 and G-3 get-togethers, this is one of the best. You've used such great imagery all through the fic, scenes that work (and aren't extra, being there just to be there), and a great over-all premise in which this to happen. It doesn't stick out from the other fanfics of this same AU, remaing right-on-the-spot on the characterizations.
One of my favorite images is seeing the warship hovering over them. I don't know why, but that one has always stuck in my mind. You've also described the emotions of the characters in a very nice way that I felt flowed really well without feeling mushy or swarmy.
Congrats on a very well-written fanfic. :)