[Report This]Date: 05/02/2012 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is a great little piece and provides an intriguing glimpse into the team's upbringing. One small concern - I have read this before and I think you're missing part of a paragraph during the second portion of the test. Otherwise, great work and I'm looking forward to reading more pieces set in this prequel world.
Date: 03/09/2010 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
Well done - it's taken me too long to get to read this.
To me, one of the big mysteriesin BotP is when did Mark have time to go to the Academy!! You've tied it in nicely and I can see that if we put it in context of the series, I suspec tthat he's only graduated possibly a few weeks (at most!) earlier.
I loved the interaction between all the characters - and especially the little tiny bit about Mark's injuries when he was learning to use his boomerang.
Great work.
Author's Response: Thanks! That tiny little bit was a blot bunny that I thought to expand at some point....started with the excerpt "New toys" interestingly enough. Perhaps someday I will expand it.